Writing: Overall, the writing is quite good. There are frequent errors in the sentence structure, but they don't heavily impact the flow of the story. Story Development: The story development is better than the majority of novels on this site. The plot moves slightly faster than a normal book, but not too fast. Character Design: The character design is average. It isn't too descriptive, but it gives just enough so you can have a general idea of what a character looks like. Update Stability: More updates are needed. World Background: That's the best thing in this novel. Overall: It's good.

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Nice!

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Good novel!

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Excellent Novel!

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Good!

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Good Novel. Must read.

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