Apesar dos erros ortográficos a história é muito boa e interessante. Para aqueles que gostam de duelos de cartas. Sem fala que pelo fato das cartas seres reais, toma a história mais empolgante.

Under 13 years old having sex with a woman over twenty years old. MC is following the original work, written ok, but honestly why shouldn't he treat women as objects to sanctify his sexual needs. I hope he ends up single, everything was going well between him and the other girl who has a biju, but the need to have sex is more than a romantic development. I've read several harems, but this is the first one that makes me feel bad for the way he degrades women, I'm talking about the one who slept with him and took his virginity, does he need to degrade the woman?

Deixe eles irem descascar.

Finalmente, um lugar diferente

Esperando o primeiro capítulo [img=recommend]. Como a história vai se desenvolver, quero muito sabe a interação do novo avatar com os amigos da korra.

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Um brasileiro 😍😍🇧🇷

I like it that way, the most realistic the story. A protagonist who is already strong at the beginning is not interesting leaves dull. I hope the protagonist picks up a lot, suffers and learns everything with a little reality, especially without many women and forced romance

I liked the story, very well written and detailed. I just hope you don't have too much of a harem or woman.