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yep. I will do something maybe complicated. I will still publish new chapters but I will publish the chapter under a new book with the same name and content but under the category fan fic and not light novel. so more readers can find this and once the whole hunter x hunter world wraps up and the mc travels to a new world I will do the same example. Hunter X Hunter - Reviewers Rage Magic World - Reviewers Rage No one can find the novel under light novel caregory and you can instantly find it in the Fan Fic category. Also I will not rewrite the story but rewrite some sentences for smoother pace, better elegance and add slight extensions of details or small stuff irrelevant to the plot or characters. to sum up. Still new chapters on this novel. no need to reread. new novel under fan fic category but is the same as this, including name but different cover image since I forgot where I got the Image from. and the hunter world will wrap up probably under 300 chapters. I got many ideas but I also don't want to drag the story
Ch 47 Dinner X Or Death - Vernable_Reviewer3dCommented
lets just imagine this is a diard of the guy who experienced this and not from a hobby author. the mistakes can be easier forgiven that way
Anyway, as I am swayed in the arms of a woman who I assume to be a nurse. My eyes slowly adjust and what I see around doesn't look at all like a hospital. I see that the woman who I assume to be my mother is lying on a filthy bed with a pool of blood coming from between her legs. She has sweaty wavy hair and rags as clothes. - Vernable_Reviewer6dReplied to TrueMonarch00
is this real? are my eyes deceiving me or do I have a fan?
I am starting my first book. The book will be written in german and then translated into english. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthReplied to Lc_The_Second
itachi killed his relatives, his mom, his dad even the girl who got a crush on him and teammate. Was this truly the only way? They would have been killed either way and sasuke still lived but what if all uchihas fought together against the village or tried to leave? more bloodshed
With a smile on his face, he turned around and saw trees with red leaves in the Uchiha compound; the leaves were falling in the ground, he couldn't help but feel dread suddenly. Almost as if something will soon happen, deciding to ignore it, he kept walking towards the Academy. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
almost time for thr massacre. 7 year old naruto means 12-13 year old itachi. few weeks after itachis 13 birthday happens the massacre. I hope naruto defects and goes to search itachi. Small child naruto traveling the world is more interesting than following canon
A seven-year-old Naruto was making his way to the Academy; he looked forward to spending time with the brains of the school, Shikamaru. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
instead of no connections naruto got a bunch im this life
Both had personally thanked him and told him that Hyuga Clan would always be there for him if he ever needed anything. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
willnever happen since his sharingan powers are derived from pain and hate
"You can brat, but we will start with only one tail, having too many tails immediately might be an overdrive even for the likes of you", Kurama responded, not mentioning that Naruto needed to get rid of his Dark Side to fully be able to use his Chakra and get access to KCM (Kurama Chakra Mode). - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
naruto got the 4 elements and wood. + rinnegan+ sharingan + higher intelligence+ seals not holding him back+ kurama (super basic) + seals + shisui and itachi training. this naruto should be the strongest ever. He will also learn sage mode and rasengan
The blast of flame, so hot it was red in colour, had a massive range and covered the entire training yard. The sea of flame towered everything; the very heat turned the ground into hot melted rock. The same air sizzled from the heat as the Clones began a counter-attack. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
ok man. now its to far. jiraya lost many people and minaros death happened 7 years ago. The author is doing a good job but is exegerating the emotions too much. First naruto the most mentally strong dude gets a panic attack AFTER becoming strong by just being called parentless and noe this.
Jiraiya felt hot tears in his eyes, and a tear slowly rolled down his cheek. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
its a gg, good game. naruto is 7, itachi is 12-13. the uchiha massacre happens a few weeks after itachi turn 13. shisui will soon die
Itachi decided to teach him that as a birthday gift for his seventh birthday. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommentedNaruto heard footsteps coming towards him, and slowly ahead of the trees came out a person with white kimono covering his whole body.
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about the other comments. my guess is that naruto will leave konoha and look for itachi.
Naruto stood up and left the apartment, and he needed to train and get stronger to protect his Uchiha family. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthReplied to Changen4125
true but having a panic attack is too far.
It seems that he had a panic attack, the same day he woke up, he left the hospital; Mikoto had asked him if he remembered anything. Still, Naruto just said he didn't remember what happened, but surprisingly Itachi didn't ask what had happened. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
by the way. Naruto with his blonf hair and blue eyes having a sharingan and the rinnegan is insane. hopefully there is art for his future mangekyo
Even Naruto had somehow become involved in the whole mess. Certain people accused the Uchiha of consorting with the Kyuubi due to Naruto's interactions with Shisui and Itachi. They eventually had to move their training to training grounds 44 just for privacy. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
just watched a few videos about it. in the beginning of the series we got to learn the difference between normal clones and shadow clones. normal clones is one of the most basic jutsus and isn't used after beginning of naruto ever again. the clones dont have mass and are a genjutsu than ninjutsu. shadow clones and any other elemental clone, splits the chakra, lets you take memories from the clone and had mass. If naruto knew the forbidden technowue shadow clones then he could use it but he only know clones which only sre usefull to deceive beginner genins
In the following months' Naruto had taken upon himself to train as much as possible. He used shadow clones every day to fight with him, train Taijutsu, learn different Ninjutsu, and master his chakra control. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
what about the couple civilians naruto killed with his fire
In the following months' Naruto had taken upon himself to train as much as possible. He used shadow clones every day to fight with him, train Taijutsu, learn different Ninjutsu, and master his chakra control. - Vernable_Reviewer2mthCommented
this is a little bit torture but i am glad i didn't skip to when he was a gening. why did the author even give that option
The young Blonde couldn't help but wonder why she wanted the likes of him to sit anywhere near her.