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His image being very realistic seems a bit unpleasant to me... the protagonist seems very masculine... and he kind of loses some of the elven beauty portrayed in other stories (Androgynous/more effeminate face)... but despite that... I really like your story Congratulations
Author-san just a tip/warning... You're leaving a lot of spaces/lines blank... and that's a bit annoying. I understand that you might want to leave system messages/voices highlighted... However, from my point of view it would be better to reduce white space and highlight system messages with [*System Speech*]. Brackets are used by most authors... so pretty much all system romance readers would feel more comfortable with this