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SinfulAngel1yrCommentedCh 100 The World Fairies.- SinfulAngel1yrCommentedCh 99 This is simply ridiculous!
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he understood the assignment
"Yeah, he did," Eric nodded. "But can't he come again?" - SinfulAngel1yrReplied to SleepDeprivedSloth
Skyrim?
He then continued walking and soon, his eyes fell on a cave in front of him. (Picture in the paragraph comment.) - SinfulAngel1yrCommented
Shouldn't beastmen like rabbits also be good at reproduction? There is a common simile that says "breed like rabbits"
"Breeding and population is the only thing they are good at, after all." Helie, the Rabbit Kin smirked as well. - SinfulAngel1yrCommentedCh 82 So unfair.
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brother acting like he wasnt one of them before smh
"It is not my fault that you guys are so weak. Tsk Tsk, to think you cannot even take a little ride like this, are you sure you guys are Vampires?" Azriel, however, just shrugged. - SinfulAngel1yrCommented
"worst thing" or "worst part"*
The worse thing was that he couldn't do anything to save them. - SinfulAngel1yrCommented
Overused but still entertaining
"As for the requirements to participate, it's really simple. As long as you are below 40 years old you can gain entry, but this is only as a regular participant. To be qualified as a genius, you need to gain recognition. For our Human Race, the place where you can do this is the Zenith Academy." - SinfulAngel1yrReplied to Zack_Gooden
Masochist*
The pain in his eyes at the moment genuinely made him want to scream like a little girl and roll around the floor, but he bit his lip until it bled and endured. - SinfulAngel1yrCommentedCh 8 Survive [3]
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what was it?
This paragraph has been deleted. - SinfulAngel2yrReplied to Crimson_King
read the synopsis
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No u
'No... I should calm down... My dearest big brother probably quits the game after 1 week... His genius mind probably gets tired of that game soon... That would be good— who knows if some vixen manages to seduce him. He should not marry anyone, and he should be my big brother forever...' Alice nodded with a smile and left the bathtub. - SinfulAngel2yrReplied to shinydecapod
when novels say the mc is a "genius", it tends to be a simple way of creating plot and tends to not actually correlate to their actions... like for instance getting banned from an armory. But the story is good so idc if the mc is called a genius but most of the time isnt one
'No... I should calm down... My dearest big brother probably quits the game after 1 week... His genius mind probably gets tired of that game soon... That would be good— who knows if some vixen manages to seduce him. He should not marry anyone, and he should be my big brother forever...' Alice nodded with a smile and left the bathtub. - SinfulAngel2yrReplied to Raj_Shah_7152
- SinfulAngel2yrReplied to Raj_Shah_7152
My review was harsh and I apologise, I can clearly see an improvement as the story continues. I won't say that all I said is wrong because I have reread, but I will say sorry for me speaking too soon. With your new editor and wonderful story writing, this is a very promising story and you've done good job at improving.