The_Overthinker
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The_Overthinker15hReplied to Bakenekonyeah but its an auxilary power so such concepts cannot be applied since he cannot awaken the fruits potential.
Damien watched as his 'Sensory Deprivation' turned the warriors into headless chickens, scrambling around without any control, letting it play out for some time.- The_Overthinker15hReplied to luckyroo
this is waaaay before him. This is probably the old guy that was seen in the skypiea arc
The hard-headed warrior named Vaper felt furious at the disparaging words, "We are ready to fight to get back our homeland till the end of time!" - The_Overthinker15hReplied to GetReligion
2 for one special, no? Since you made it all the way here, might as well stay and enjoy 🤷
[85] Echoes of Shandora - The_Overthinker15hCommented
I think you mean "strong suit"?
Stealing was Rowan and Nami's suit—though they weren't as good as Carina. Nevertheless, if Cavendish were to have a log pose that is at least 6 months older than his... - The_Overthinker22hCommented
kizaru locked in for a sec
Gion surprisedly looked at Kizaru, having never seen him take someone so seriously. But then the man returned to his lazy stance with an uninterested look. - The_Overthinker1dCommented
Um...that sounds like the D surname is written all over it
"The Blood of the Kings is not a metaphor. Almost all of the Royalty of this world are but Kings only in name and status. They do not possess the Blood of the Kings, and most do not even possess the Will of the Kings. A lineage can only be called the Blood of the Kings if generation after generation of Kings and Rulers had emerged from it, possessing the Will of the Kings. Their Will of the Kings became so potent that it became a part of their Blood, allowing them to pass it down to their legacy." Robin patiently explained to them. "But don't be mistaken. Possessing the Blood of the Kings does not mean that a person is a True King. It is the same with Possessing Conqueror's Haki. Even if you possess it, it does not make you a True King. And things are not really simple. Once a Will is shaken and becomes weak, it is very much possible that the next generation won't inherit it. So it is possible that a parent possessed the Blood of the Kings, but the child did not inherit it. It's similar to when a Child does not inherit Conqueror's Haki from their parents." - The_Overthinker2dCommented
extreme but understandable, at least until they get a decent cook
"No more fruits in this ship. Never again." - The_Overthinker2dCommented
hahaha, was not ready for that
In front of Bartolomeo was... a transparent wall? - The_Overthinker2dCommented
yay, time skip time!
"6 months." - The_Overthinker2dCommented
Uh, tears would still stream, no? Or is the dream world like OP where you can overpower your body using your will? Ah, whatever.
But… he refused to cry. - The_Overthinker2dCommented
um...not to sound like a smartass but, is that not the entire appeal of entertainment: to escape? The thing that really changes between weebs and the average person is the level of escapism that a person needs.
Being a Japanese teenager, it was only natural for him to immerse himself in the popular culture of anime, manga, and light novels. But he didn't consume these forms of entertainment solely because they were trendy in Japan; he found solace in the fantastical worlds they offered, using them as an escape from reality. - The_Overthinker2dCommented"...The destination that log pose points at from this island... is none other than marine base G-11, which is impossible to pass through."
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Listening to "Harbinger" by Eternal Eclipse ( i left my playlist running for too long) while reading this is a different feel.
In one slash, the jitte was sliced into two, and Rowan, in shock, had to drop to the ground to prevent the sword from slicing through his neck. - The_Overthinker2dCommented
Alright, I can see good grammar, sentence structure, descriptions, and punctuations. If you do not plan to drop this, author, then I shall gladly read. Also, that is quite a lot of times he's dug. Was he a mole in his past life?
He looked up at the grey sky. It has been that way for as long as he can remember. Sighing in defeat, he dug up the rough ground from the mound next to him and poured it down the hole he dug earlier. He was very familiar with this action. He had it done more than a thousand times. More specifically, one thousand and eight-hundred fifty-two times. - The_Overthinker2dCommented
I like this. No stressful fights, annoying politics, worries about the future or anything. There is often a lack of adventure when it comes to one piece fan fics. I do not see authors truly exploring the incredible place that this world truly is. They would rather concern themselves with strength and interacting with the main cast. This is a breath of fresh air.
Ch 37 Chapter 37 - The_Overthinker3dCommented
Yall, school has absolutely buttfucked my sleep schedule. Waking up at 4 am is the norm now. I sleep at 11 pm 😭
"WHY?!" I cried like a child. - The_Overthinker3dCommented
Alright, this is a mistake many authors make when introducing characters and writing conversations. Objectively speaking, would these three not have discussed this topic already in the years they have been hanging out? A better approach would be to ask if that standpoint has changed or if they had heard about this other ecchi anime (using the chance to introduce hsotd). I say this without a hint of malice. I hope any aspiring authors may take this advice to heart. It is not that big of a deal but the smallest of tweaks can take a story from good to goated.
"Whatever man, leaving that behind, so what is your favorite ecchi anime?" - The_Overthinker3dCommented
Details are nice but when you try to specify everything, you can easily make redundant statements. It isn't a bad thing, just something to keep in mind.
As the pizza place was rather close to his apartment, he went walking while looking at the people walking by getting there 15 minutes later. - The_Overthinker4dCommented
I love this chapter. We hardly see just how terrifying the sea of paradise and the new world truly are. When the main characters just swat everything away, it seems like it isn't that big of a deal when it's truly a nightmarish sea. Honestly, I am glad Rowan had his strength cause it would have been over if not for him, lol.
Ch 36 Chapter 36