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"For the last time, my name is Keitaro and not Minato!" Keitaro insisted as he picked himself up from the floor."Yeah, yeah, calm down, Minato," Gojo replied with a dismissive tone, seemingly unfazed by Keitaro's correction.- DaoistOfTheAbyss5dReplied to starline_realm
master is more subserviant, and as a crown prince he souldnt use it
"Mister Cale, you and I share the same style right?" - DaoistOfTheAbyss6dCommentedCh 58 Chapter 58
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she*, ur talking about the nun not chase
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i dont agree about the dialgoues, but thier r some scenes that can be cut out, for example when PJ dose his daily routine like exrsicing or doing reptitve stuff, that can be shortened to 2 pargraph max. but otherwise, story is perfect.
I would like to know your opinion on the matter (those who are up to date with the updates). The review is pinned, and I will be reading the comments. By the way, asking for your opinion on the review does not mean it's an invitation to attack the person who wrote it. They were not insulting in any way, they were just giving their opinion (even though I don't agree). - DaoistOfTheAbyss6dCommentedCh 58 Chapter 58
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and we love it!!!
'His personality changed in the novel after going berserk for the first time, but it looks like it is still the same now.' - DaoistOfTheAbyss9dReplied to Hacher_UnfriendedVenion Stan was the type that could gently smile at you, but you still feel nothing but disgust for him.
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he knew cale (rok soo) was going to read that novel, he wrote thpse power so rok soo take them when he became cale
'No wonder nobody ended up taking control of it. But then why would the author mention something that could be useful but was never actually taken by anybody?' - DaoistOfTheAbyss11dReplied to melomaniac
wha.. no?
Frying and stirring was for them to do as the main characters, not Cale. Wouldn't they get closer to each other faster since they met four days earlier thanks to him? - DaoistOfTheAbyss12dCommentedCh 2 New Life
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- DaoistOfTheAbyss22dCommentedCh 1 Hypocratical
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hi is there romance and with whom?
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am i the onlu one the read CE as Cursed Energy?
After finishing my breakfast, I returned to my room, equipped with a Windows CE computer with an internet connection and a vast collection of books. - DaoistOfTheAbyss1mthReplied to KingSpy25i
its not hpuse
"Of course, I, Gregory House, not only see in PJ Duncan an image of my younger self or an apprentice, but I see a son whom I respect and even admire. I'm proud of him," the man said, smiling broadly. - DaoistOfTheAbyss1mthCommented
when is the next chapter?
I'm sorry, but this chapter can be considered a filler chapter, so there isn't really any story development (which doesn't mean it's not related to the story) but if you don't want to read it and wait until the next chapter, you are perfectly welcome to do so. - DaoistOfTheAbyss1mthCommented
at least a picture?
Kyouta was wearing a red&blue Spider-Man costume, but his head was bare. All he can cover his head with is a red cap located around the neck area, meaning that this headdress is part of his heroic suit. - DaoistOfTheAbyss1mthCommented
here it wouldve been better to write " u need to take some rest" its better than repeating same worde twice
"I will explain. but first, you need rest, take some rest" he said when the woman from his behind crashed herself onto me "I'm glad you are alright dear, we both were really worried "