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This book has many good parts, the problem was just the protagonist's deviation from the path he should follow. From the beginning he was told, I think, that he had to get stronger or he was going to die, but what he intended to do was just get a little stronger, build a company and live happily. Other than that, the book is very good. The title doesn't make much sense either...

I started reading this novel because I liked the other book by this author, but (spoiler) unfortunately I gave up after I realized that the protagonist would become a woman :(. There could have been a better indication that this would happen. It gave me hope and then crushed it until it became nothing .

Almost 10 "filler" chapters in a 30 chapter story....seriously author?

Thank god, it's finally back!!!

I could criticize the novel, but the problem here was more the author. He's probably never left home or met a human being in his life, and his only social base is web novels. The mc's power is already on the super op side without any problem, which is very strange because what is normal is that when the authors create a power they add a defect, even if it is minimal. Another thing is the fact that any rich guy can influence the game at will, completely disrupting the creation of the world, which is why I generally don't like video game stories. The worst of all is the MC's relationship with women... seriously, if you didn't believe me, read until chapter 5 for an incredible revelation (spoiler: a super hot delivery girl, who delivers at 2 am, without vehicle, enters a stranger's house, leaves, then comes back, and when she comes back she goes straight to the mc's bathroom, "the son of a bitch... doesn't lock the house?" then she suggests that they drink, two complete strangers , and BOTH have their first time..... Seriously author, if you don't have experience just don't write)

Very inspired by dual cultivation, which is a good thing as it is the best novel of its kind. Also this author is very good. The only thing this author cannot be inspired by is the habit of not finishing things that the dual cultivation author has. Otherwise, it's very good.

The only bad thing about this is that the authors have no responsibility, so they often never finish their stories, no matter how good they are. PS: My little brother, you damn cuckold.

I hope that someone, a god or whatever, somehow "kidnaps" (cough cough I didn't say anything, forget that part) forces this author to finish one of his works, it doesn't even have to take long, it could even be very quickly, it could even be one of his worst stories, but may he at least finish it. Pretty sure he doesn't have OCD.

Worst of all, he's good, every book by him is at least decent, some are better than others. But the main problem is this, this guy doesn't finish anything, he must have serious psychological problems.

O autor me parece ser o tipo que não gosta de terminar nada na vida. Seus romances são ótimos, mas eu só espero que ele termine pelo menos um antes de morrer.

Wouldn't it be simpler to say that the game world and its laws really existed in another dimension and they're going to move there?

i see.....

duck you, autor. They didn't even get to do the thing!!!!