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Review Detail of Daniel_Roberto in Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

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I could criticize the novel, but the problem here was more the author. He's probably never left home or met a human being in his life, and his only social base is web novels. The mc's power is already on the super op side without any problem, which is very strange because what is normal is that when the authors create a power they add a defect, even if it is minimal. Another thing is the fact that any rich guy can influence the game at will, completely disrupting the creation of the world, which is why I generally don't like video game stories. The worst of all is the MC's relationship with women... seriously, if you didn't believe me, read until chapter 5 for an incredible revelation (spoiler: a super hot delivery girl, who delivers at 2 am, without vehicle, enters a stranger's house, leaves, then comes back, and when she comes back she goes straight to the mc's bathroom, "the son of a bitch... doesn't lock the house?" then she suggests that they drink, two complete strangers , and BOTH have their first time..... Seriously author, if you don't have experience just don't write)

Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple

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