First reading the story it was hard to read due to the writing and some choices but as time went on it got better. I think the opness the mc has is a good amount as well. Story definitely can grow on you and give you a smile I think. There could be a quite a bit of improvement added to the writing (format wise) as well but it’s not exactly a big issue.

Imo you’re being too nice. Only 22 chaps in but mc just seems like an idiot. I can only assume that his IQ test was swapped out and he suffers from some sort of disability.

Love this story, may not be the most advanced and best writing but just like where people say this for Solo Leveling. (not saying they’re similar) They’re both enjoyable reads to me that I can spend my time scrolling and and going to the next chapter for however long the story is.