Review Detail of YohanHK in MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

First reading the story it was hard to read due to the writing and some choices but as time went on it got better. I think the opness the mc has is a good amount as well. Story definitely can grow on you and give you a smile I think. There could be a quite a bit of improvement added to the writing (format wise) as well but it’s not exactly a big issue.