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I like that in this version of the story the hokage is getting more suspicious and the fact dragon is still able to pass hints of him being compromised, since I never understood how someone with dragons position didn't have fail saves in case he gets himself into a genjutsu and gets compromised so as to let the hokage know .
i want to read this can you tell me if its a harem? i hope so but i dont wanna start reading it and then i dont see the mc with multiple partners.
like a Gladius? if so yeah that would be cool but i think him having an actual KATANA would be better since traditionally real KATANA's are short swords and with him having that he would also be able to use SAMURAI techniques, p.s i know alot of people will confuse KATANA's and NINJATO'S but im sure Author-san knows the difference.
Author-San please 🙏 in this remake don't make Hinata distance her self from Naruto when he discovers who his parents are and get all emotional and shout at her to leave like the previous version, that one didn't make sense to be due to the fact they where so close already and seeing him be distraught about something and asking her to leave I don't think she should haven't left but stayed to talk about it with him so he atleast has someone to share that news with .
yes he just changed minor stuff I'm not mistaken you can still read that one on royal road even. you'll see the small changes there
this makes more sense Author-san in the previous version Tenten was basically the herald of a god of swords but after her awakening she started forging weapons and that didn't make sense to me but here she becomes the herald of the right god and I can see her path of weapon forging better sothing this
This makes sense 👏 and I can actually see this type of development happening within this kinda ninja world it's hella cutthroat literally lol but for people who fall short of their dreams after working so hard and still being belittled I can see them doing that, Author-San continue with the great work.
Author-san it says the link is invalid or expired can you plz update it so we can get access to your discord?
I'm curious to know how old are the girls Faye and Diana in the story rn?
if this is true can someone tell me more about this story?? i wanna know what the rich did to the redditors.
Hey Author-San I just noticed that there is no harem tag to this story and I'm wondering if you forgot to put it on here, and if you don't want this story to be a harem story?.
think bro he is sharing the exp with all his minions that just means the Queen most have been at least level 150-200.
I just hate her.
bruh compared to whom you can't just leave it like that??
Did you mean LAPD?? What does the extra P stand for.??
nope Natalia is the one with the crystal not June lol dude reread the paragraph
What does BGM mean??