Review Detail of Thomas_Harkness in End of the Magic Era

Having read the whole story, my only true complaint is the few paragraphs at the end in which the story's end is summarized, its almost like the author ran out of ideas and chose to wrap up the story. Which was truly disappointing when there were so many things that were left unsolved/finished. Honestly the story could be double the current length and still have more to cover the world building is amazing, while the character development is a bit lacking and it would have been nice to see a bit more diversity in the characters.