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Why don't you make him stay longer in doupo continent since it is just a small part of the great thousands world and dou di is just a sovereign level and there is earth sovereign (can travel through space like a stellar level in swallowed star) and there is a heavenly sovereign(like a unverise level or domain master in swallowed star) I also recommend you to make him master some weapon making in douluo continent and alchemy and spiritual arrays in doupo since it will become handy in swallowed star universe. Also this idea has alot of potential since there is a higher level than true god in swallowed star and swallowed star universe is just small universe in the orgin continent and the origin continent is a tiny part in the chaos universe where universe overlords live. Hope you don't drop it midway and I regret writing this review 😁😁😁
Keep up the good work fantastic chapter.😁😁 I think you should make him learn every breathing technique and add their properties together to make one technique
I would say it's one of a kind it's pretty interesting i read it in one day and that is an accomplishment since I only read couple chapters a day. It has a good mc that is following the martial path and exploring new paths constantly to get stronger 💪 but he lacks threats that would push him to become stronger faster and the world development is pretty minimal since we only know that there is around 6 stages for power each has 12 levels as of chapter 47. Also I want to thank the author or the translator for the amazing job, the Grammer is good and the word choice is Phenomenal and I hope you would give me other novel suggestions that have the same idea or type since this one was pretty interesting and creative.