on so many reviews you acts like a bully because you are the author?every time some oen critic you tell them basically "no your dumb you dont understand"and you dotn even bring any argument on the table,that is not how you shoud interact with fans even if they critic something!,you only want peopels to say yes yes novle is perfect right becasue tahts how its feel if some oen check on otehr rewievs hwo you respodn to normal critic ? you even copy so much from Everyone Else is a Returnee even xanxia novels dosent copy that much from each other =) dunno,my bad on spending so much money on such arrogant author.and like i can see in other reviews your onyl respond will be soemthign childish like hahahah or see you :D

leave critics and take them are 2 different things,thats he cant gof ro hsi fmaily make no sense fin.

hahaha i know you hate critic ,but dont take it personally my arguments was with facts based on whst you presented with sentences in your novel, but like i said before i will just ignore it and enjoy.

novel got contracted really nice but when you have 0 stock you shoud not put the new one as previlege until you have a stock.. =(

idk how can he be lvl 45 thats completly not possible,lilith said not all peopels are like bai and kills stronger enemys to lvl up fast, they need a long time to lvl up since they fight only monster "weaker" than them even his ice princess participated killing second orders,so its okay but lvl 45 unrealistic with the statesments of previous chapters,so he shoud have killed 2000+ first orders weaker than him or a coupel hundres higher lvl than him but here again its stated that beats on same lvl are normally stronger,i know for the plot author may has to do that but still the statements in chapters before make like that not much sense =/

what if she is not from a alternate universe but if the 2.Firmament Fragment had a power to make a copy of herself and send it to the past,and once bing xue is strong enough lilith has to go back to the original "body",or has to pay anotehr high price for using that Firmament Fragment,i think the "old" bai got in a endless blood rush because they killed all his loved one?

senpai author dont you think the leader class is to powerfull? image he has millions of peopels under him get 10x times or more stronger than all his peopels get killed than he would be compared to before absolut weak i think that could make him to dependency on that power later on. shoud there not be a limit to how much power boost he can get ?u.u if he has 100m peopels under him thats would make him 100x stronger XD the dependency would be to high.

I did read now quite a bit the similarities to Everyone Else is a Returnee is quite alot...,i hope you only got just some inspiration from it ,if his father is now a super demon or arc angel and his mother aswell and ,god (bible) is the end boss i just want sincerly remind you that than it would be almost a 1 to 1 copy, hope that will not happend u.u

I like the story BUT: its feels almost like Everyone Else is a Returnee he mains the same weapon his "partner" is almost same(power lvl etc) only different race, almost same power fraccions,the power system almost same, i just hope its not ALL same like his father is an arcangel or something close to it in power, his mother is some one special too and GOD is evil than the story would be almost same... i hope that will not happen.

and potatos

im german and did live arround 8 years in chile every time my family and me spoke german they asked if we were fighting xD

he can bring some tacos from mexico

or Antarktika maybe the dream cotinent to life on

if the author wnat the brother and sister to be togehter so led it be but than he has to manage to build that inside the story in some healty way ,if nto fine too lets the choise to the author

well he has to discover potatos so he can finnaly eat currywurst mit Pommes without that there is no german empire

i personally would find it disturbing if his kids fight each other just for power....hes a man from the future he shoud team them properly

i mean elf will only be friend

sadly that will happen because of that i will drop the novel :P

Well... the sub loveplot make absolut 0 sense,->the girl is poor her mother is deadly sick in the hospital she only need moeny to get healty again,the father is 5 years on missions -> 5 years he and his son never called them once like they never heard about Phone calling like impossible he has not 5minits time to call one time each weak/months/year sure make sense xd,system said if mc did not meet the girl she would be a prostitue for 3 years in a attempt to safe her mother but fails and commit suicide, but father did come back after a half year so its would not actually happend... again its make no sense,father stated he sended money but goverment stole it makes again no sense why shoud they aim for his family if hes the strongest fighter against monsters?at the same time he stated they did not tell him that his wifes who he had not time in 5 years to call once, was deadly sick and needed a operation worth of 1m dollar that is for him and for who he works peanuts like for you and me less than 1 dollar again its make 0 sense why would they do that?,the brother plays the same game like his sister but they dont know that and never meet ingame? the brother its statet plays 4 h each day the game but never in 5 years had he time to call his sister or his mother again its make 0 common sense but when the 2 comes back act like i love my sister/daughter so much WTF,the uncle told his niece she could work as a prostitut to get money, if the uncle knows his brother 1% he would know the father would have killed him right? again its make 0 sense ohh this time its make maybe sense since the father cant even spare 1minit to call them once in 5 years ...maybe skip 1 meal and call your family ? im at chapter 200 the story is not bad but also nothing special,but the story arround his love make absolut 0 sense,if you introduce a charackter author and a very importan one atleast the backround story shoud make a "little" bit sense but that the biggest backround story fail i ever read about no hate, i will keep reading and see what happens

Chapter 40 now but why is he so childish? wasent he 40 before mmm