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DaoistwdIUhn
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Well... the sub loveplot make absolut 0 sense,->the girl is poor her mother is deadly sick in the hospital she only need moeny to get healty again,the father is 5 years on missions -> 5 years he and his son never called them once like they never heard about Phone calling like impossible he has not 5minits time to call one time each weak/months/year sure make sense xd,system said if mc did not meet the girl she would be a prostitue for 3 years in a attempt to safe her mother but fails and commit suicide, but father did come back after a half year so its would not actually happend... again its make no sense,father stated he sended money but goverment stole it makes again no sense why shoud they aim for his family if hes the strongest fighter against monsters?at the same time he stated they did not tell him that his wifes who he had not time in 5 years to call once, was deadly sick and needed a operation worth of 1m dollar that is for him and for who he works peanuts like for you and me less than 1 dollar again its make 0 sense why would they do that?,the brother plays the same game like his sister but they dont know that and never meet ingame? the brother its statet plays 4 h each day the game but never in 5 years had he time to call his sister or his mother again its make 0 common sense but when the 2 comes back act like i love my sister/daughter so much WTF,the uncle told his niece she could work as a prostitut to get money, if the uncle knows his brother 1% he would know the father would have killed him right? again its make 0 sense ohh this time its make maybe sense since the father cant even spare 1minit to call them once in 5 years ...maybe skip 1 meal and call your family ? im at chapter 200 the story is not bad but also nothing special,but the story arround his love make absolut 0 sense,if you introduce a charackter author and a very importan one atleast the backround story shoud make a "little" bit sense but that the biggest backround story fail i ever read about no hate, i will keep reading and see what happens

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About the Abyss part, if I remember correctly, he was on an island very far from society, so I probably wouldn't be able to make calls, and about the abyss coming back after half a year, I think Ichiro giving her money somehow changed the future so that she got to the abyss and her brother, the rest I agree with you