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    IMMORT_AL2d
    Replied to uchiha_satoru

    Thanks for the review

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    Naruto- Amaterasu
    Anime & Comics · IMMORT_AL
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    IMMORT_AL5d
    Posted

    I am not giving you a 5 star because the book has some problems for me. - you know I loved your protagonist, kind, bright, smart and heck even his relationship with hiruzen, but then that sudden kidnapping happened and while it might have been realistic , the book just fell off for me, killing, becoming a root, loosing all sense of personality , getting manipulated by Danzo, Joining root was a choice , right? then why join it, some decisions didn't make sense for me, His blinding optimism and character and his friendship with guy, guy and Kurenai were amazing in my opinion but after this whole sudden change, it just feels...wrong, the guy that was the protagonist that I liked is dead I guess, great story none the less, I just skimmed thee chapter there on and just didnt like the story much. guess I am a sucker for that Naruto like optimism. - also lol , the dick references are in abundance bro, why do you keep using it , sus . great story though. loved the early MC.

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    Naruto: Shinobi SI
    Anime & Comics · KK9494
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL13d
    Commented

    how uu gonna take care of him in ure old age bro, can u even walk to KONOHA

    "Keep an eye on him for now; although not very likely but if he does start showing signs of achieving strength like hashirama's then I'll take a risk and deal with him before it's too late"
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL20d
    Commented

    can't he say he's the reincarnation of tobirama sorta?

    Her words left the hall, including the Jonin who had called for the trial, in stunned silence. Even Kazuki stood frozen, emotion flickering across his face.
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL26d
    Replied to NOTShadyy_Guy

    us

    "Too bad I can't show you now."
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    Journey Of Zoro In Another World
    Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL29d
    Commented

    all the best my man, in ure next book, or prolly this one only, try making a patron, might make u some extra bucks

    Ch 17 Notice
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    Lookism [Flow State]
    Anime & Comics · Kqro
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL1mth
    Replied to Kqro

    did leave a comment in previous chap I meant

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: Mission
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    Lookism [Flow State]
    Anime & Comics · Kqro
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    IMMORT_AL1mth
    Commented

    I did leave one in previous chap

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: Mission
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    Lookism [Flow State]
    Anime & Comics · Kqro
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    IMMORT_AL1mth
    Commented

    I hope he doesn't try to kill Toji or something now

    Ch 82 Chapter 80
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    Journey Of Zoro In Another World
    Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL1mth
    Commented
    The CH-24 did in fact cure me and would continue to do so. All because of the regeneration factor I gained. Basically, all the damage NZT causes to my mind and nervous system just gets repaired right after.
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    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL2mth
    Commented

    this community is awesome lol

    Ch 21 What if? *Omake*
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
    Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL3mth
    Commented

    I thought Aakashi would access the deep drive zone but this is good too , kudos

    Ch 291 Chapter 291: Basking in Glory
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    Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
    Anime & Comics · mythoast
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL3mth
    Commented

    hey...this was ..unexpectedly wholesome, thanks author

    Ch 289 Chapter 289: Elevating the Worthy
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    Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
    Anime & Comics · mythoast
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL9mth
    Replied to Lone_Philosopher

    No, but he's my favourite character Mahabharata.( He's a grey character tbh)

    Back to my grandma, I had always been fascinated by the stories of legendary heroes like Karna and gods like Lord Shiva. And epics like Ramayana and the Mahabharata.
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    Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.
    Movies · Saintbarbido
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    IMMORT_AL10mth
    Replied to Agustus_Claudia

    its the Mahabharata war day count, so since it started the 14 day is what they are talking about.

    "Didn't he was so proud on the 14th day? Why now running like a coward? Is he afraid of that weapon or shooter of that weapon? Hahaha."
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    I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata.
    Fantasy · ForManaga
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    IMMORT_AL10mth
    Replied to Professor_Light

    Kushina being the jonin sensei in itself won't pose a problem as long she doesn't teach fuinjutsu to Kuroko, At least not openly. Otherwise the Hyuga clan would react.

    Now tell me, any ides for Kuroko or any of them?
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    Naruto- Amaterasu
    Anime & Comics · IMMORT_AL
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    IMMORT_AL10mth
    Replied to RECLUSE

    I read this in economics, the definition of money - money is what money does...

    Even if Naruto expected something worse, but Mizuki wouldn't react in such a crude way, even though actual manipulation of Naruto was not in his agenda, as the nature of Ashura was not possible to change, not until he figures out where their real spirits are affecting their supposed reincarnation from, Madara and Sasuke were walking at the same time, so were Hashirama and Naruto, this cannot happen unless the Indira and Ashura ' reincarnation ' are not their true soul reincarnation at all... But they are something akin to a... Parasite..!
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    Naruto : Mizuki Reborn
    Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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    IMMORT_AL10mth
    Replied to anantab

    Its over now with an amazing ending to boot , read it again bro, You might be missing on something.

    "Wow I'm pretty handsome" i way to myself while looking at the mirror I have flowing red hair with uplifted dark red bangs and a youthful visage and nice red eyes "hah I kinda look like the Jade emperor from the god of high school" I say while smirking until suddenly information assaults my brain.
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    The Jade Emperor In Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Big_Poppa
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  • IMMORT_AL
    IMMORT_AL10mth
    Commented

    has been changed to 16 now

    I mean imagine an 'Oooh 𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘶𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺, the legal age of consent in Japan is thirteen' looking ass guy and they just showing him your six-year-old friend and say how they're an adult that can drink, fuck, gamble and legally murder people.
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    (COMPLETE) A Murder Wizards Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Bored_MC
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    IMMORT_AL1yr
    Commented

    This was utterly beautiful :)

    Ch 1 Prologue (Edited)
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    In Naruto with AI Chip [being rewritten]
    Anime & Comics · 1mZ1ad
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