For some reason I really live this one

Story-wise I think it was pretty good, it considered Odin's pride and all that. However realistically, Odin should have accepted that Spectre is superior; not only is Spectre an abstract, he is stronger than odin can ever be. Add to that, it would a WISE choice to be humble in-front of a true superior being. Though maybe I'm a bit biased, nevertheless I'm loving the story so far.

Best of Luck Author-san

New Daughter Acquired

Best of Luck Author

What happened to this fanfic?has it been deleted?

hahahaha

Yes

Though the theory of him being a reincarnator is still on the table

Lets's summarize what we know about Nick Iron so far. First he knows a lot of things that regular students shouldn't, he knows some secrets of hogwarts that even the professors doesn't know, he has an Elder wand which is weird considering that there should only be one, he has strong occlumency and might be a ligemens, and now he tries to be buddy buddy with Hermione the smartest student of all hogwarts. One should also note that he is Slytherin, meaning he has great ambition. With all this said, the most obvious answer would be that he needs Hermione's smarts for something, and he wants her mind to be protected so it would be kept a secret. The only weird thing about it is how will he make sure Hermione will keep her mouth shut. With all the evidence so far, and from what I could conclude, I believe that Nick Iron is from the future or an alternate reality, that would explain his Elder wand. If he was from the future that would explain how he knew about the chamber of secrets and the philosopher stone. If he was from an alternate reality, however, things will get a little bit murky. Now per se, the future will be desolate and Death will be able to break free, I believe that the wizards find a way to bring Nick in to the past, they taught him occlumency and ligemens to help him protect his identity. Again if he was from an alternate reality, it would be a but murky. Given his actions so far, we can conclude that he is after power, it is probably his great ambition and the reason why he is in Slytherin. If he was from the future, he is probably seeking to be the strongest because of the Desolate times that's about to come, or be strong enough to stop it. If he is from an alternate reality, he might want to be strong enough to create his way back into where he came from. Now, as for the Hermione situation, we know that Nick don't know anything about Orion, given that if Orion existed in the future he would have known about his technique, and that Orion shouldn't exist in a different reality. Since, Orion is an unknown variable, Nick's plans may be put into jeopardy, specially since Orion shown his heavenly breaking talent. As such, Nick needs someone smart to help him become stronger, and get around or surpass Orion. And as I had stated, Hermione is the smartest person he can have, not to mention he can use Hermione to learn more about Orion.

My theory is that Nick Iron is from an apocalyptic future where Death was set free by Moldymort and came back through time to prevent it.Another theory is that Nick is a reincarnator, like some fanfic protag.Lastly, Nick is Death's champion, a pawn to set her free

I like how mature he is, and how mature he handled the situation

Welcome to Demon School Iruma-kun reference?

Cause not everyone wants to be a pokémon master and catch all the ladies, and I particularly like it because to be honest. I find having a big harem to be quite bland.

I think either this or the last chapter is wrong because they are the same

it's alright author-sama I feel you hahahaha

Oh God you sound like a toddler. Did mommy let you play with the phone?

Authors who have a brain probably

Then why read it in the first place?! Just leave the novel alone why do you need to devalue it because of your selfish opinion?!

The concept of the story is great, it's just the story moves so fast that it's almost unreadable. The character doesn't really develope and he gains his powers to fast without too much of a challenge. The story gets confusing sometimes and honestly feels like the world is making it very easy for him. The concept of the system is good though. The author is like a child that rants in his story, like dude we know (now) that your a league player but you don't have to rant everytime about other people's comments, being a league player doesn't give you the right to be a karen. I know that this is your book and you can. do whatever you want but if you don't want to be criticized just don't post it. That is all I hope that both the author and the book can grow up because right now it feels like watching a child draw on the Mona Lisa and have tantrums when said to him it's bad