thanks

thanks

it is very good, btw Where I can find the original? like the mtl version of it?

this story isn't built for web novel. in web novel popular stories are those that focus on action and harem mc because people Here are degenerates and romance is a small part. if it was a novel I could understand also it is also more fitted for Wattpad. But probably you came from there. in short what I am saying if you want your fan fic to become popular with romance as the main focus It won't work. he'll even stories that focus on action and have female mc don't do that well. so what I am saying is don't waste your time here if your goal is to upload your ff only on web novel.

imma let him cook

yo author how come Obito hasn't still gone to cast genjutsu on Yagura? Also, will you change Minato's fate?

this ff is very funny though some things are disgusting but it is good 👍

I can relate to that, it is really hard for us handsome people the plebs in this app can't fathom how difficult it is to have 100 women daily trying to get your attention 😢

This ff is better than og naruto! fight me!

he is like me fr

maybe I am mistaken but like Hiruzen said: Danzo I am the hokage!" or in this case mizukage I cam understand that she is his advisor but should he really give her a reason? I mean she is demanding not asking

I see thanks for the clarification 👍

the irony

the idea isn't bad, the writing is alright the story development is meh it isn't really interesting but at least the mc has taken the first step toward accepting who he is. though that idea of mc splitting himself from Yagura isn't something that I would do it seems like a bad plot. as for the romance it is meh. Firstly romance isn't fitted for anime like One Piece Dragon Ball naruto etc because that isn't the focus instead makes the story bad and distorts the flow. Also, you could go for a female character that already exists instead of making an oc these were all the reasons I gave the story development such a low rating. as for the character design, it is understandable you haven't described even once one character. That's all I had to say, if you want to know what could be done better that's easy. Continue writing and not only will you improve but you will learn from your mistakes through trial and error. that's why I gave it a 3 out of 5 I could be harsher with my words but that's not the point.

yo translator how come most fics follow the same route Luffy took? they are taking the easy path right?

no

no it was his vice captain

nothing

chief I think you mean 2024. 2044 is 2 decades ahead