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first thought was Twilight as well 😂
why would Dante order himself
he's trying
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is the author going to proof read at any point or should we expect this level through the novel?
why did she repeat the same thing?
betrayal because she left a loser and abandonment because his friends had ambition. so far the MC is not likeable at all 😂
the world built is new for me as you rarely see a villain system trying to rob fate on webnovel. The grammar and the spelling mistakes will have you mentally replacing or rearranging words in every paragraph so get used to that early. The MC is dumb and progressively gets more so, relying on plot armor to achieve his objectives. The female heroines seem smart to begin with but progressively get to the MCs level due to prolonged exposure. It is a good attempt at a first novel.
goes from "Indeed." to "idk man" in 5 mins 😂