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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost7d
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    read to chapter 22 and couldn't go further. may pick up again once this goes through an editor or 3.

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    Chaos Devourer System
    Action · Supreme_IQ
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost10d
    Commented

    87637 reference to "fine don't tell me" when he says John Smith

    Ch 72 The night is still young.
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    Limitless The Strongest Revenant
    Urban · Yinghuo_392
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost13d
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    first thought was Twilight as well 😂

    Imprinting was an intriguing concept among dragons, somewhat akin to what those werewolves did in a certain famous movie series. Dragons, like their fictional counterparts, could imprint, usually intentionally, but sometimes, very rarely, unintentionally.
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    The Inheritance Of The Supreme Immortals
    Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
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    Anakin_Lost14d
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    What you Want? Smartphone?
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    Modern Cultivation : The Strongest Couple Bonded by Vampire System
    Fantasy · Author2189
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost15d
    Posted

    review after chapter 100, this novel was going great until the gender switch for the MC. i get the reasoning but I'm just not interested in the direction of the novel.

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    My Blood Legacy: Reincarnated as a Vampire
    Fantasy · Katanexy
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost15d
    Commented

    why would Dante order himself

    "Dante, there's something strange here. Stay on guard," Dante ordered, and almost no one took him seriously, except Elizabeth, Sara, and Clovis.
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    My Blood Legacy: Reincarnated as a Vampire
    Fantasy · Katanexy
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost17d
    Commented

    he's trying

    "Hump!" Valentina huffed as she watched her precious son in the hands of the 'witch vixen.'
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    My Blood Legacy: Reincarnated as a Vampire
    Fantasy · Katanexy
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost25d
    Commented

    own

    "He's not a property, you can't open him so he's not yours, even the queen can't open someone so you definitely can't own him, trading of slaves has been banned for years" Hanna spoke.
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    Lust System: Monster girl Harem
    Fantasy · Crimson_Blue
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost28d
    Posted

    I could not make it past chapter 5. even for webnovel, this story has awful grammar. i understand for most of these novels they translate from raws. if that's the case for this novel, little to no proof reading was done. I may pick this back up if a major redo has been done.

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    I Am The Destiny Villain
    Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost28d
    Commented

    is the author going to proof read at any point or should we expect this level through the novel?

    It should be him who beat his bodyguard and him then snatch the bride.
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    I Am The Destiny Villain
    Fantasy · Parshant_Morwal
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
    Commented

    why did she repeat the same thing?

    "Hm, although I am not a Sword Master, I do have some knowledge in this area. Moreover, my eyes are very insightful," Xie Meiling said and with a neutral face began to make an analysis: "His Sword Aura is very unusual, I've never seen anything like it. It's not so noticeable, rather almost hidden, and you can only detect it when it has already hit you, which in some moments can be too late."
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    Mission: Seduce the Master!
    Eastern · MisterBombastic
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
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    Although a part of him questioned the authenticity of the letter, Jaegar was captivated by the idea of studying at the fabled wizard school. He recalled the whispers he had heard, the snippets of information he had gleaned from newspaper articles, all hinting at the enigmatic academy hidden from the prying eyes of the world.
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    Tale of a Hedonistic wizard
    Fantasy · Luciferjl
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
    Commented

    betrayal because she left a loser and abandonment because his friends had ambition. so far the MC is not likeable at all 😂

    Rubbing his chest, he felt the pain intensify, constricting his breath. A whirlwind of thoughts consumed his mind. His family's indifference, the abandonment of his friends, the betrayal he had experienced, and the departure of the girl he truly cherished—all converging in a cascade of despair.
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    Tale of a Hedonistic wizard
    Fantasy · Luciferjl
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
    Posted

    read up to chapter 26. what's there to say, even with a smut mindset the grammar is so bad you can't read a paragraph without substituting words. the MC is a monster but somehow a likeable monster. this would be a good novel if the author got an editor.

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    Reincarnated with the Mind Control Powers in Another World.
    Fantasy · Night_phantom
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
    Commented

    the grammar is steadily getting worse but we ignore it cause smut

    Ch 21 Chapter-21
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    Reincarnated with the Mind Control Powers in Another World.
    Fantasy · Night_phantom
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
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    ( There will be no Romantic Relationship between Damon and Sapphire. Incest Pass DENIED! )
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    Sign In To The Body Of Chaos At The Start
    Fantasy · StrikerAuthor
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
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    Age: 22
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    Primitive Man
    Fantasy · ElectricLuna
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
    Posted

    the world built is new for me as you rarely see a villain system trying to rob fate on webnovel. The grammar and the spelling mistakes will have you mentally replacing or rearranging words in every paragraph so get used to that early. The MC is dumb and progressively gets more so, relying on plot armor to achieve his objectives. The female heroines seem smart to begin with but progressively get to the MCs level due to prolonged exposure. It is a good attempt at a first novel.

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    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasy · starry8sword
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
    Commented
    " Can I speak lie?" Jun Tianyun asked.
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    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasy · starry8sword
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  • Anakin_Lost
    Anakin_Lost1mth
    Commented

    goes from "Indeed." to "idk man" in 5 mins 😂

    " Idk man."
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    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasy · starry8sword
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