its a good novel but the development is too slow 200 chapter and hes not even a chunin

i like where the story is going it sems pretty interesting .............................................................................................

so like rob lucci?

this is one of my favrioute novels i actively wait for more chapters to be released

great chapter

i really like the story up to chapter 14 what the release, schedule 1 chapter a day?

im liking the story so far the development is nice system is fine not to intrusive hope you dont drop the story

also in the future one of his goals has to be a bergkamp flick

im really enjoying the story its good that your using real footballers names and no chinese bullshit .................................................

good story im really enjoying it ///////////////////////////

ill give it 5 starts just for the fact that i like every novel with music

if you carry in writing ill carry on readingnot bad for a first chapter

im really liking it hope you dont drop it anytime soon. ..............................................................................................

havent even read it yet but 5 stars just for containing northen blade in the title .....................................................................

3 stars cause there only one chapter but from what i read in the first chapter its pretty good

i think you should finish this story and get all the zaraki clan backstory and all that stuff and then make a spinoff about the oldman

last time i wrote a review was 6 months ago 6 months later and he still hasnt started his journey dont get me wrong i really do like this fic but its taking slow pace to a new level.

well here we go again hope for the best this time

im really liking this story it has potential to be a good naruto ff

im not sure but im pretty sure that ive read this before is this a rewrite? ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// / / /