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DaoistgTIhPf10dReplied to JasonNotCrying- DaoistgTIhPf2mthPosted
Hello there shameless author here! First of all I would like to thank all of you who have decided to try this little project of mine! This is my first novel and I lack in many things, but with your help I wish to grow better so don't have any mercy on me when it comes to criticizeing! I will try to read all of your comments and possibly reply to them! Also this is just a hobby of mine which means the update schedule is not set in stone!
- DaoistgTIhPf4mthCommentedCh 447 Meeting of Subordinates (2)
- DaoistgTIhPf4mthCommentedCh 446 Meeting of Subordinates (1)
- DaoistgTIhPf4mthReplied to MapleHound
god damn it! I DONT WANT TO PAY FOR IT FUCK!
This book has been deleted. - DaoistgTIhPf8mthReplied to THE_LOST_GOAT
- DaoistgTIhPf8mthReplied to Argumus
- DaoistgTIhPf8mthReplied to Sora122_4
- DaoistgTIhPf8mthPosted
Ok this novel is great, I mean really great. This is one of the only novels where the mc is a monster and STAYS a monster not like in other stories where they get a skill that alters their looks or they act like a human would. None of that is happening. The story in the beginning is a little basic but as you keep reading it it becomes more and more complex. This story has stakes and the mc grows with every decision he makes because there are consequences and he WILL make bad decisions because he dosent know jacksh#t about anything and has to find out through those bad choices and learn from mlhis mistakes. Overall it is a GREAT novel with good writing, story and characters. The only things bad about this work are the grammer and update stability. Sometimes it takes months just to upload 1 chapter and the grammer now is mostly perfect at the start it may discourage some readers.
- DaoistgTIhPf9mthReplied to GrandVoid
- DaoistgTIhPf1yrReplied to Facepunch
with bad grammer
"Dead men tell no tales" - DaoistgTIhPf1yrCommented
his flesh
As for the decoy that was sitting on the throne I just used the remains of the hobgoblin and put some cloth to hide this flesh. - DaoistgTIhPf1yrCommented
HIS EYE NOT THIS EYE
After around 3 seconds the shaman opened this eye and faced this palm towards the now sitting skeleton! - DaoistgTIhPf1yrReplied to Neilstone
bro I dont think he knows what that is
**** - DaoistgTIhPf1yrCommented
finially its not "this" its "it"
In the end, it wasn´t able to! - DaoistgTIhPf1yrCommentedCh 17 Brain Damaged Undead?
- DaoistgTIhPf1yrReplied to SageOfTheNorth
dont know but lets hope it gets better
"Hmm? Do you guys come at me without any weapons? You underestimate yourselves!"