Review Detail of DaoistgTIhPf in Trial By Combat

Hello there shameless author here! First of all I would like to thank all of you who have decided to try this little project of mine! This is my first novel and I lack in many things, but with your help I wish to grow better so don't have any mercy on me when it comes to criticizeing! I will try to read all of your comments and possibly reply to them! Also this is just a hobby of mine which means the update schedule is not set in stone!