webnovel
1632866751647
Defno

Defno

Lv11
2021-08-13 JoinedGlobal
75.4h

of reading

76

Read books

Badges

5

Moments

54
  • Defno
    Defno7d
    Replied to WinterDragon_1

    The first chapters when MC is mentioned, and again in later chapters when MC was mentioned. If you planned this all along then you might need to go reread your story to fix those mistakes.

    Ch 99 Meeting the main-protagonist for the first time!
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno13d
    Replied to WinterDragon_1

    You did previously mention the protaganist as He/Him in early chapters, whether you intended to or not.

    Ch 99 Meeting the main-protagonist for the first time!
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno13d
    Replied to AllaroundBaka

    Author has refered to the protaganist as He/Him previously. So I have to assume this is a new twist the author decided to add.

    He was face-to-face with her!
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno17d
    Posted

    Never updated the anti theft with the other half of chapters. So clearly those chapters were stolen from elsewhere

    I Just Won't Play By The Book
    Eastern · 7 Percent
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno17d
    Posted

    Not a very good story overall. It just feels like it is constantly jumping from event to event without anything in between. It reads more like a diary.

    Spiritual Energy Rejuvenation: I Began Cultivating By Farming
    Sci-fi · One word, that's settled.
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno30d
    Commented

    Utterly stupid. Why use your trump card as a random attack and not for a killing blow.

    Beholding the concealed fear within the eyes of the devil, finally escaping the illusion that the human below casted, Leo unfolds an enranged yet wicked smile on his face... Hurriedly gripping the floating silver scale within the atmosphere, causing the puddle of black blood within its silver plate to swirl- releasing an intense scent of metallic blood as the devil silently beheld the black blood within began to evaporate within the thin air...
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno30d
    Commented

    He didn't even bother to check if he could get to 200/200 without using a point.

    His Human Virtue points instantly decreased by 1.
    Staying Alive Cautiously in the Celestial Realm and Becoming the Strongest
    Eastern · Sunk into the Pacific Ocean
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    Mist of illusion lvl 8

    Skills: Invisibility (Lvl 8), Mist of Illusion (Lvl 7), Jinx (Lvl 5), Constricted Soul (Lvl 5), Decayed Aura (Lvl 5), Wisp of Poison (Lvl 5), Nightmare (Lvl 5), Telekinesis (Lvl 5), Physical Body of Soul (Lvl 9), Condense Soul Shrieking (Lvl 5), Soul Scan (Lvl 6), Strong Physique (Lvl 5), Dying Immortal (Level 5)...
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    It makes no sense to keep calling it mana when you are talking about Qi levels, Qi recovery pills and Qi circulation.

    Even the smell quickened the flow of mana within his body.
    Staying Alive Cautiously in the Celestial Realm and Becoming the Strongest
    Eastern · Sunk into the Pacific Ocean
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    qi

    Executing the Geng Metal Finger consumed a lot of Mana.
    Staying Alive Cautiously in the Celestial Realm and Becoming the Strongest
    Eastern · Sunk into the Pacific Ocean
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    It should be both to LVL8

    [ Upgrading Mist of Illusion skill to Level 8 and Invisibility to Level 7 would cost you 5 Medallion of Forceful Upgrade and 7,500 horror points!
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Replied to Master_OfDao

    You upgraded invisibility to lvl7 too, check chapter 167 full status. Invisibility level 7, has been lvl 7 for a while now. You have been adding stats and upgrades then forgetting quite alot. I would suggest writing it down, because it's getting more frequent as the chapters go on.

    [ Congratulations upon upgrading your Invisibility to Level 7! ]
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    This was 140 after the fight with the devil. Cmon Author

    Speed: 120
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    bruh you just gave +6

    Free Attribute Points: 0
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    Wow yea, the Author is forgetting his stats, skill and to tally all the increases.

    Strength: 150
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    He literally gained 15 at the start of this chapter. Author forgetting his stats??

    Level: 9 Mid Foundation Realm( 7,958/10,000 Exp )
    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Commented

    FFS Author stop repeating yourself. We get it already.

    In fact, she had strategically chosen to weaken the demon before sealing it, ensuring a successful capture. She wasn't struggling—she was being methodical and precise.
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Replied to Gorloww

    I vote for a chapter on the demon kings erotic dream [img=recommend]

    Her eyes darted around, searching for the source of the sound.
    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Posted

    I thoroughly enjoyed this. A unique concept with interesting elements and good world building. It's great reading novels where characters have real personality. This was quite a fun read.

    Damn, I Awakened With A Horror System!
    Fantasy · Master_OfDao
    detail
  • Defno
    Defno1mth
    Posted

    This starts off really well, but starts to fall off hard in the later chapters. The MC suddenly starts doing random shizz that makes you wonder if he is braindead or his sister drunk an idiot elixir giving him 10x the effect. The fights get dragged out needlessly and become uninteresting and things are constantly repeated over and over. Started 5/5, so really hoping the Author listens to the readers criticisms and gets this back on track.

    Obtaining 10x rewards! Reincarnated into a novel as a side-character!
    Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
    detail