keep it up man story is good. but also try to add some over strategic plans

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so first 2 chapters look good but still too soon to say anything concrete.... hope you continue this more then just 2 chapters......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... mk........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

fuck you , you inconsiderate Piece of shit . why did you drop this it was going good or did you just copy this off some place else to farm it .you are the most disgusting , most reprensible waste of sperm ever

not the best but i think this is more like mc has solo leveling powers or atleast seems like it the guy even has ignis

damn son that some world building.... could be better but hey i read i dont write so good luck dude .

its a war thunder system/fic i will give you a complete 5 star rating just because of that. why i play it still i have no idea but there you go

this a lot better then some of the fanfics here but I would wait till there are at least 10 chaps as people here a very keen on dropping their stories and just start writing new. here's to hope for this to keep going

hey bud this one was one of the better ones out there why did you stop if its a matter of support give me a hollar but hey if its anything else its a shame but i hope you continue this. also i find it quite interesting on how an actual soldier that is competent will do in these situation... and to get the word count blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blahb balhabn hbalab ahakbha ujgascvhnh bmasckn jghsdc vbkjer hjscxkj bsdkjgvwkujg'baskcvbiw Fandom, a company best known for its vast wiki covering films, TV series, games and more, is introducing a new interactive video feature for deeper digging. The company described Fandom Interactive Video as an immersive video experience that allows fans to engage and navigate fictional worlds through features like trailers loaded with clickable graphics offering facts, lore and direct access to Fandom's wiki communities. Think of it as a "choose your own adventure" pop-up video style, a Fandom spokesperson told Fierce Video. Fans cannot create their own content with Fandom Interactive but they are able to customize their entire experience based on information pulled exclusively from Fandom communities. The company said future versions of Fandom Interactive will include personalized recommendations such as shoppable options and custom experiences for advertising clients. Fandom is a developer of a global entertainment media platform designed for fans to explore, contribute to, and celebrate. \blab blab lblabalblablbalbalablbabla nbalabla labala lab xkab,m clias,as cklasgc,mz bloql,n ksac,asbciqw,m kljsakw,mnascloc akj bwekj

so it's a lot better then the usual Potter fanfics but I am curious to see the pendragon thing . shouldn't the guy claim the vault or something but then again I I liking how this is going

was one of the better fanfics out there. plus it's interesting to note to develope new characters and how they fit into Potter world it's amazing how good it came out to be honest. and I hope it's not dropped already

better then most , but gotta say I like how it's not generic enough to start eighter in ww2 or in 2012 so I really hope this contniues. Good stuff