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i dont mind your chapters being slow... your faster and shorter chapters feel sloppy in a way... all of your "you, i, he, she, him, and her" are all in the wrong spots are mixed weirdly... please slow down the wrighting you were doing better on a slower pace
hmmm.... question what exactly is the talon bloodline? If you think about it it's something important that existed long before ray since it's still a main quest... also will quin ever gain draconic properties... hes powerful yes bit his body is weak. he needs a way to strengthen his body...