From now on you swapped Lara for Lana

Even though I like Cliffhanger, please avoid repeating what happened in the other chapters when monetizing, as it is charged based on the number of words, some people may find this repetition bad.

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Denying a denial only makes it positive, in this case you said that everyone believes that, but following the next statement, it doesn't make sense

it would be totally plausible, depending on how statuses actually work in that world, if it's based like a game, or like real life In a game you don't need these statuses for various reasons, be it point limits, non-relevance and everything else However, unlike a game, if based on real life, intelligence would be his ability to think, the speed he thinks, possibly learning things, while a game character is controlled by someone not influenced by status, the way he fights and acts would be based on these silly things If I'm going to try to explain it in the simplest possible way, it's the same as having superhuman strength, but being an idiot who shoots himself in the chest because he thought the gun didn't work.

generally dex is something related to accuracy, critical attacks. Agility usually depends on the work, some are related to the speed you walk/attack, or something like perception speed+all the others

I imagined, however, maybe it would be simpler for other readers to read just one profession and understand, as an example, just calling him a doctor, which is assumed to be his main profession.

generally quotation marks indicate speech, but it wouldn't make sense, besides it's better to choose one between Prof and Dr

This sentence was a bit strange, at least the way it was written

It seems to have potential, but it's not my favorite theme, well, if it follow the story as it already shows, plus little things throughout the text that attack my ocd

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Would it be a comma instead of a period here?

I have a small ocd so, is it possible to start with lowercase and use She as she?

Hadn't he gone out and asked about body cultivation?

Who is Eren?

For a brief moment I believed that he had already died in this paragraph, and I was trying to understand if ghosts talk in this world

uses in gaming terms, the meaning is a little different, it's like you use the definition of potato, for a tomato

digital games, it's easy to know why, there's no respect for anyone, and if you know if you're a woman or a man, then it gets worse, besides, in our culture, games are something "more for boys", so in terms of quantity we see less of them, while it is not impossible, what hinders this most in a professional team are the fans

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