You should also put in the fact the MC was cuckolded by his enemy and his lover ascertained to it.. Then he forgives her happily because of some massive info dump

You should also put in the fact the MC was cuckolded by his enemy and his lover ascertained to it.. Then he forgives her happily because of some massive info dump

why did you put spoiler alert? Dumb?

I personally dislike the MC for not being able to stand firm for himself.. to me I doesn't seem like comedy but rather a disappointment, when his system is supposed to be God of War system The MC can be so childish and stupid sometimes that I scorn him my personal opinion though other's opinion might differ🤷‍♂️

quite disappointed in the author he doesn't even have the guts to write what he wanted......changing the story midway because of a suggestion quite a good story though...but the author👎 nothing serious tho

it's rather a good book you can give it a try if you don't want your MC to progress characteristically and stay dumb till the end....... the story is a good hit but the MC's low IQ is a turn off

We the lover of Harem and Epicness and doesn't mind the narcissism.... Thank your contribution Elyon

This book by Elyon is a masterpiece. it has managed ho keep me hooked for a long time, which btw Is a hard thing to do and thanks to updating it stably, my interest has never been reduced. I look forward to more surprises which I know you have in store for us and once again, Thank you[img=update]

Although the book is interesting the rate at which the chapters are entering can make it boring...quickly leading to people dropping this and you can just read this for free on the Lightnovel app

This book makes me sick and I don't understand how this got on any reading app.. the author should go learn tailor The MC is just like someone with stage fright claiming to stay low-key.. very disappointing I can't even bother saying all the defects.. example having tremendous power and then your closest sibling died because he burned his life force for strength while cultivating demonic arts .. Imagine right?

Over all this story is super good 👌 Thumbs up 👍 to the author ... we are hoping you are through with your break on time and can continue with this righteous novel....thank you brother😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉🤣😁

one of my super favourites I have been following this novel for a long time... and I'm always satisfied especially the MC he is a cool and amazing MC... I recommend you give it a read if you haven't ......and if the author drops something as legit as this again I'm gonna follow it to the end[img=recommend]

another disappointing novel by jks manga it looks like you have lost your touch with how bad you novels MC characters are being created ...I have to say except from dragon system the rest have not been up to the task maybe you should try stand up comedy bro

This comics is a total hit for me... since I started it I can't stop it.. the only issue I have is having to wait a days to read 3 chapters all the time

well this novel is heart rending.. the overall composition is all so good. an exciting storyline. I do recommend you to read it but the best feature to read books like this is patience