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ILove_Hayan04814hCommentedIt will really help, especially if he starts on gaining divinity.
"Maybe I should spend part of my salary on therapy sessions?" the thought flashed through my mind.- ILove_Hayan0483dCommentedCh 136 Chapter 137: The Three Families Decide to Beat Up The Emperor
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Hahaha
"Do you like monocles?" - ILove_Hayan0483dCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5: The Ancient Sun God and Ouroboros
- ILove_Hayan0484dCommentedCh 27 Swindling Swindlers I [FIRST DRAFT]
- ILove_Hayan0481mthReplied to PrimalWhiteStar
Although there is a new MC it is still very good.
For entertainment, I used to watch anime, read books like novels and comics or watch f1 or some other racing programs like Moto GP. Now that I think about it, I haven't watched any new anime or any show due to my work. So I am not sure about it. As for novels, I had recently finished reading LOTM. It was a masterpiece if I do say so myself. But I didn't get the chance to read its next book Circle of Inevitability. But I did read the author's other novel, The Throne of Magical Arcana. COI didn't have many chapters back then but last time I checked, it had more than 500 chapters. - ILove_Hayan0481mthCommented
I really tried my best ignoring it but....man I can't help but feel that the majority of this fic is written by ChatGPT. That overly descriptive type of writing is just too obvious. TBH I would be okay with it. This is not the first fic I read that used ChatGPT but this is just too much. Use it sparingly, please. Some may notice and not mind or may not notice at all but for me who read over five hundred + webnovels at this point, it's just so off putting. I know you are a newbie author but relying on AI in terms of writing and using it as a crutch is never good. Based on my experience the ones who usually improve the fastest are those who don't rely on such things...yes, the first chapters may be un-edited and rough but their stories vastly improve every succeeding volume. Don't make AI a crutch.
Ch 20 The art of negociation - ILove_Hayan0481mthCommented
oof
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evening?
It was around four in the evening when Jinah and Haru made their way back to the former's apartment after an eventful yet short day. - ILove_Hayan0482mthCommented
tf, then he could just spam Fire Ring...or any stronger magic and he will be invincible.
"Most importantly, the passive ability of this meditation art ensures that I never have to worry about running out of magic power. Truly an incredible passive ability." - ILove_Hayan0482mthCommentedCh 64 [64] The Pretender
- ILove_Hayan0482mthCommentedCh 63 [63] The Dark Sun of Britain
- ILove_Hayan0482mthPosted
I have high expectations for this fanfic. Rarely have I seen LotM fanfics as most only contain a few chapters. So for my impressions. I can't really state any definitive comment as I have only read 10 chapters but so far it has been interesting. The MC is okay and is kinda likable, plot is straightforward, as for side characters I can't really say much as I'm still 10 chapters in and his interactions with others are rare. No glaring grammar and spelling flaws. The word count is also long which makes every chapter a worthwhile read. Overall, a satisfying and interesting read so far, really hoping that this continues and shape into a more interesting story as I can see so much potential. Kudos to the author, you are doing well and I really hope that this story will last for a long time. 9.6/10 for me as of chapter 10 tldr: Pros: >MC is not an idiot at least >Has LotM elements >Word count per chapter is long >No Glaring Grammar and Spelling mistakes >Straightforward Plot Cons: >Due to the Straightforward Plot established in the premise it can get predictable but predictable plot doesn't always mean bad execution. As long as the author executes the plot well and introduces characters and worlds with depth it should be fine.
- ILove_Hayan0482mthCommentedCh 3 3. The Beginning
- ILove_Hayan0482mthCommented'Never mind World, that's the last option. Wait since you are World and I am wearing a suit and especially since I wouldn't trust my life with anything else. You can be considered as my other self or the other half. I can play as The Fool from Lord of the Mysteries. It was a great novel, we can also build our guild and my game character around the theme. Good old fantasy horror with old and outer gods in the mix. I can use the gun with a lightsaber in this fight, like a true American citizen. American breathing. '
- ILove_Hayan0482mthCommentedCh 2 2. The Game
- ILove_Hayan0482mthCommentedCh 1 1. The End
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COI is Good~
For entertainment, I used to watch anime, read books like novels and comics or watch f1 or some other racing programs like Moto GP. Now that I think about it, I haven't watched any new anime or any show due to my work. So I am not sure about it. As for novels, I had recently finished reading LOTM. It was a masterpiece if I do say so myself. But I didn't get the chance to read its next book Circle of Inevitability. But I did read the author's other novel, The Throne of Magical Arcana. COI didn't have many chapters back then but last time I checked, it had more than 500 chapters. - ILove_Hayan0482mthCommented
Rukiaaa!!!
And damn you guys are as horny as me hahaha. Looks like the next world is going to bleach huh, can you drop the names of all the beautiful characters here, I have to see how to flow the story naturally.