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This is a very good storyline. It would be even better if an editor had gotten a hold of it to help with grammatical errors. Sometimes those errors deviate from the story, until I can figure out what is being written.For example: the word " children" in it self is plural: therefore there is no reason to put an s at the end to make it plural ... "the childrens" This caught me off guard and I had to straighten out the sentences with the word "childrens" in it. This is still a very interesting story with a lot of " what's going to happen next" that it instills me to continue to read onward!
I am really enjoying this story. It has believable characters and it is not filled with horrific violence or terrible abuse. It includes nearly all the genres of a storyline. The story has drama, romance. comedy etc. My only problem with all the stories are that they have way too many chapters. I do believe that this is an editing problem of the whole ebook reading apts. Editors have you ever heard of condensing several chapters into one or starting a new book with the same characters-called a series!!! Thank you do much for this type of storyline. It is a fresh breathe for me from all the other storylines I have read in the WEBNOVEL app.
The grammar faux pax of the possessive adjectives his and her is very irritating! It is changing the way the storyline is progressing and giving me a headache to try and figure out what is going on!!!!!