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I agree with your point of view. Since cold characters are the ones who'll give anything up to become strong. But, as far as I recall, Nox was never even interested in climbing the Tower. He's doing it just because some weird person inside his head told him that he'll eventually get an opportunity to meet his parents. So, if his core intention of climbing the Tower is deeply related to the kindness and love in his heart, won't it be strange if that just changes at a point. Of course, like any being, he too will display both emotional and physical growth as the tale progresses, and he'll even become a bit cold. But I think the probability of him becoming self centered and too focused on nothing and no one except himself is too slim. Would you like me to change such a thought process? And also, how're you liking the story so far?
I understand where you're coming from. But truth be told, I don't really think the MC is 'stupid'. I think that maybe, he's just confused. Unlike most novels where the MC is transported to the world of magic and sword, and somehow just 'accepts' the fact and moves on with life; Nox behaves a bit more human-like (since I think that most people won't be able to adapt readily to the Tower if they're magically transported to it.) Is it a weird thing? Do tell me your thoughts on the matter.
Apathetic... Let me ask you, will such a being be interesting? Will he be a delight to read? Is such a character a role model and cool~? Would you like to befriend such a person? Obviously, the answer is yes. Or maybe... it is no. It depends on the individual answering the question. So, what is your answer?
It is inevitable indeed. But as you may have already noticed, Nox is just a human, like me, like you. He is afraid of suffering, and a few of his decisions are made of such a fright as well as his unnecessary haste. He is human. He will err, and as a consequence, he will suffer, as he has in his past. I hope you'll be around to support him. Thank you.
What an interesting question indeed. I could reveal the entire story for you right here and now, but sadly, I'm afraid that many others read the comments too. As such, do allow me to answer your question in a way which may seem like 'Beating around the bush'. Nothing unnecessary will happen in the tale ahead, but I, as author, am brave enough to take necessary steps whenever needed, even if it may mean that I'll make the readers unhappy for a few fleeting moments. In your words, it's not funny if no one dies, but then again, it's not funny if people keep on dying, since the impact will be lost. I am aware that the story is a slow burn, but, heartily hope that you do continue reading Nox's tale, and decide for yourself if it is worthy of your magnanimous eyes, or not. Thank you.
Thank you for your kind words, Mr. Fool (A klein moretti reference. I don't actually mean to call you a fool). I do agree that the first half is quite predictable, but, I believe I've started using a bit of my creativity from the second half onwards. And the third half (yet unpublished) is quite unpredictable, if i say so myself. Enjoy. Thank you.