The story is going great, just hoping the romance side of things gets more time and isn’t just a sidenote.

I’m liking the story so far, just wish the chapters were longer.

Author, your story has been great, but what is going on with the romance??? Please, stop keeping us so confused with it. Also, if people are going to keep only thinking about the “prophesied one”, can we not see it? The MC is going to get screwed over at this rate and I’d really not like to see that. Still, the story really has been great.

I hope the MC doesn’t ignore romance for too long.

It should definitely be Ben.

At 28 chapters, the story is progressing well. It has interesting lore, and the MC has an ability that is different from a lot of the stories you read on here and it is currently being handled well, with a lot of potential. There’s also already the hint of romance, which I am happy to see. Hopefully, it won’t take forever for that to continue progressing. Hard to say right now since it is still early, but I’m happy with everything I’m seeing. There are the occasional mistakes in the grammar, but those have been minor and there are not very many. Keep up the good work Author!

Your descriptions of the battles are steadily getting better.👍

Honestly, you’re going pretty good with English not being your first language. There are times where you mess up a bit, but it’s not normally very bad. I’m able to read all of it and understand what you mean, even when you mess up. You’re really not doing bad though.

Story is doing good!👍

Several parts actually had me laughing out loud.😂

You’re doing a good job with the relationships and showing how Zen and his girl kind of just clicked. Keep it up! I would recommend slowing the pace of the story a bit in later chapters since it does feel like the characters are in a hurry, but that’s more of a nitpick honestly.

The detail was much better!👍

I would recommend adding more detail in how they fight, but you’ve got a good foundation for how to do the combat going forward.

I like how they are progressing, just make sure to not rush their relationship so it feels authentic.

I’m pretty impressed with the story so far. Please keep releasing chapters!

He should make a deal with her so that she helps more and insults less.

Yes, but if she doesn’t get added, she needs to find love. She’s been a part of the story for a while now and both of her sisters have found love. She should too, even if it isn’t with the MC.

I am making this review as of 28 chapters being released. I have been pleasantly surprise at the quality of writing in this novel. The story is progressing fairly quickly at this point, but due to story points, this makes sense. The MC is likeable, though it is clear he has his issues due to his history. The action scenes have been described well and I have been enjoying them. This novel deserves a high rating right now.

I’m pretty impressed with the book so far. Please keep releasing.

MC should use his abilities more but another good chapter!