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To be honest I look forward to reading this fanfic but the conversation seems like a teenager trying to make a story which is really lame because to me the dialogue didn't seem to have a precise detail and I think the author didn't seem to do a research about DxD as there are a clear plot hole but I'll just move on my day and forget about the existence of this fanfic.
What kind of line is that.
Yeah good mc already wasted 10 years timeskip for the sake of plot and the author decided to nerf.
Nerf
Fix this.
Bruh...
Ok.
It's okay, you put a lovable character.
What did I expect.
Plot.
She's fourteen
Well, it's kinda disappointing...I was reading with high expectations but I guess it's my own fault hoping for something really good.