Review Detail of Dokja_49_51 in Fate DxD:Archer Reborn

To be honest I look forward to reading this fanfic but the conversation seems like a teenager trying to make a story which is really lame because to me the dialogue didn't seem to have a precise detail and I think the author didn't seem to do a research about DxD as there are a clear plot hole but I'll just move on my day and forget about the existence of this fanfic.