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Fabian_Ma

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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma2mth
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    yo Invayne, got stuck again?Kana Arrived in the realm of origin. shouldnt it be about time she learned about her own? In my opinion, that should be her Priority now. She needs to understand this new realm and learn more about the inhabitants, recovering her memories would be a piece of cake and at the same time give her all that knowledge that she needs.

    Ch 1182 The End Of The Trial
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    Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma7mth
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    My, this trial will be might be hard for Kana to complete. by the time she is supposed to finish it, she might not want to leave but instead to bring her family there haha :D

    Ch 1159 A Warm Home Part 1
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma7mth
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    Is this the end of chaos law? was it fulfilled ? what does that mean for anima? also what would have happened if anima and shiro had decided to merge together? would that have created a tier 11 version of her that would have been able to ignore chaos law?

    Ch 1281 Epilogue
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    Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma7mth
    Replied to invayne

    Breaks? my, if Kana heard this you would now be on the receiving end of her beatings haha. :'D

    Ch 1149 First Trial Part 2
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma7mth
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    Invayne! you better not neglect this story again. it is by far your best story so far and you have already slacked of on chapters for this for an extended period of time, it was pure toture! >\ if you do it again Kana might turn you to nothingness for getting in her way of getting stronger :D

    Ch 1149 First Trial Part 2
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma9mth
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    Somehow I like the idea of Mira becoming an alchemists specializing in beast and bloodlines, becoming some kind of mad scientist. it fits her perfectly and I have no doubt she would be able to create some super powerful bloodline by combining immortal beasts or something in the future :D I wouldn't mind more research chapters at all. its a welcome change. a full arc on it would obviously be too much but you can still shove in a few batches of such chapters every now and again. great work :)

    Ch 733 Finding the Limits of Celestial Nectar
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma11mth
    Replied to lazy_wanderer

    I see. I'm just asking because It doesn't show me any options to buy. :D

    Ch 120 Reunion
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma11mth
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    Hey LW, hope you are well and healthy :) is it intended that we cannot buy the privilege chapters ?

    Ch 120 Reunion
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma11mth
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    Hey Invayne, first of, I'm glad you are still working on this novel. a block can be a real pain. but if you just can't decide on a direction you want to take, you might want to try writing without any specific direction in mind and see where your subconscious leads the story to and if you don't like it you can just try again :D suggestion: how about you write a few chapters of this academy arc in a diary form from kana's perspective? not only would that be interesting but it would also allow you to move this academy arc along a little bit faster than normal and maybe after a few such chapters you might get new inspiration or remember what you originally planned for the immediate future of this novel. I'm sure you have a kind of rough red thread for this novel but thinking out so many different subplots, twists and turns and development for so many characters can quite easily confuse you I imagine, making you lose direction. so switching to diary form for a few chapters will allow you to not have to write out so many details which might help clear the fog in your mind and help you find the direction you want to take. :) whatever you do, we will always be here ready to read it :D

    Ch 1102 Yana The Shutin Part 2
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma11mth
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    i really dont know what to think of this... development. This is gonna be akward as helll both for shiro and isillia aswell as for lyrica... I was hoping she'd get together with nan tian, hes a much better match for her and he was the one who helped her out of her down phase and helped her overcome her fear. he's been by her side 24/7 for months... I dont reallywat shiro to break his heart like this. but knowing nan tian he probably wouldnt care even if he hd to share shiro with lyrica. there is still the possibilty of a love triangle haha. personally tho I hope it doesnt work out between lyrica and shiro, as I said before nan tian is just a way better match.

    Ch 1234 Lyrica's Question
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
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    REILII!!! are you there? get back to work already or I will sue you for all the suffering you inflict on us all with your Laziness! Jokes aside though we would really appreciate new chapters. you don't have to stress yourself and post two chapters a day just one per week would already suffice :) also this is like your child, you can't just abandon your child and not care for it anymore ! :D

    Ch 1221 Three Paths
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Replied to lazy_wanderer

    Doesn't explain how they were able to destroy his soul. his soul isn't restricted after all its still of a higher level. unless they have some high grade soul attack that is which I doubt. but we will see what you come up with in the future haha

    Ch 116 The D.O.G System
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Commented

    Haha that was good stuff. thanks for the entertainment haha a haha . :D more of that please

    Ch 118 Time to meet the family 2
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Replied to lazy_wanderer

    Then there is also something else I wonder about. Samael said that he couldn't beat them because he was severely weakened in this realm. that means that he would have been able to beat them in the higher realm. to begin with he was originally that strong that they couldn't kill him and only managed to seal him away. It was stated that he had recovered around 90% of his former strenght. even with his powers weakened in the lower realm, such a rebuff would not apply to the strength of his soul. how were they even able to destroy his soul. that part just doesn't make any sense to me. you should have described the fight in detail and explained what exactly happened there and how they managed to destroy his soul. I can't be the only one who is frustrated and can't figure it out :D

    Ch 116 The D.O.G System
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Replied to lazy_wanderer

    I see but did you have to go that far as to destroy his soul? look what you've done to him. he is a system now with no memories. why did you make morana do such a thing? if she had waited and build up enough strength I'm sure she would have found a way to heal his soul and bring him back exactly how he was before... I don't see that happening now. and I really wanted to see them forming a lovely relationship. they were sooo perfect for each other :'(( whaaaa!! bad author ! I'll continue to support you anyways. if anything write more chapters already haha

    Ch 116 The D.O.G System
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. I'm so sad that samael is gone... I can almost imagine Moranas pain ... :'(

    Ch 116 The D.O.G System
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 115 Sub-system creation
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Commented

    <3 thanks for the chapter. splendid job as always. :)

    Ch 115 Sub-system creation
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
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    A new chapter *.* almost thought I was hallucianting. what a nice surprise. thanks for the update LW. are you better now? can we hope for more chapters soon? :D sorry sorry, of course your health is more important but ... the story is just soo good that I can't help but selfishly demand for more xD sadly I'm chronically broke otherwise I would gladly shower you with gifts :\

    Ch 114 The Legend of Wandering Immortal Demon 2
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  • Fabian_Ma
    Fabian_Ma1yr
    Replied to Houraji

    I realize that this is a pretty late reply but rather than the use of advanced vocabulary, it is your grammar that is the real issue. I do not mean any offence but the way you build your sentences is just horrible and makes it terribly difficult to read. we can't really immerse ourselves in the story because we have to stop and reread like every second sentence. those with poor English comprehension will have a very hard time even understanding a dialogue or monologe. despite that, for those with advanced English comprehension, it is a very good story. its very original and unique. if only the grammar was a little better, it would be easy to lose oneself while reading. I heard there is some kind of program or application for Gramma check purposes. it will kinda point out any grammar issue and provide a possible correction. don't know what its named tho. I suggest you try and contact other authors. most are pretty easy to talk to. they might be able to help you, might even provide some inspiration.

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