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lordharry1yrReplied to DragonWarGodlord of the mysteries
He was arguing on social media as a keyboard warrior and suddenly the scene went dark.- lordharry1yrCommented
Short first chapter, and MC has already switched to the second setting. I didn't get to know anything, but was only confused about what was happening at the end. May be author is directly picking where he had left his previous book. not sure if it was a great idea. Anyway, writing is extremely good. I wish i could get more info from the first chapter.
Ch 1 Chap 1- A New Journey - lordharry1yrCommented
Reading thoughts in the same format is quite confusing. Can you separate them using brackets or '. most authors so the same
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might be you meant *even younger
Four figures walked towards the downed young man overbearingly. The four figures were also four young men, but the one who appears to be the leader of the group was an even older man that looked to be 20 years of age. - lordharry1yrCommented
*had
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some tense issue here
Toke's eyes slightly closed as he listened to the sounds of the ocean, the waves hitting the boat, and the sail fighting the wind. His child is traveling even in the womb. It reminded him of his younger self when he would journey with his late father. His father perished in a bloody battle that Toke unfortunately witnessed. The moment he saw his father get struck by an arrow was the moment he no longer took joy in sailing the seas. - lordharry1yrCommented
its going over my head
Strangely, I haven't noticed much before. I have a high height for my age and an incredible physique. Well, no wonder. I worked hard after all! I was learning control over hemomancy. Thank God I learned how to disable the passive amplification of the body - so I called it. This way, I trained as before, but I had to continually focus on my weakening. An absurd situation, but even with the amplification turned on, the effect from it increased proportionally. - lordharry1yrCommented
that's convenient
There were no special effects, thunder, lightning, flashes of light, or even heat in the chest. Just on my outstretched palm, from out of nowhere, a tiny red ball appeared, which grew to the size of a tennis ball very quickly. Crimson red. The color of blood. And the material of the ball, the liquid, spoke for themselves. Well, I'm not just some lord of tomato juice in the end? Although I shouldn't deny it right away. - lordharry1yrReplied to Devilngle
MC had a fling with a character from Game of Thrones, but no true love interest as of yet (I am stockpiling).
detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - lordharry1yrCommented
lotm opening uhhh
He was arguing on social media as a keyboard warrior and suddenly the scene went dark. - lordharry1yrCommented
was just seeing a clip of family guy on bible 😅😅😅
"Hoho, even people who believe in God do such ugly deeds... In that case, reading the Bible without understanding the real truth, will inevitably not make one attain the gospel ...blindly following the out dated precepts of the ancestors and giving up on your own thinking, these people are so pitiful..." - lordharry1yrCommentedIt all started when the first contact with intelligent life off human conquered space was established. The aliens had reacted in a much more violent manner than what humanity had suspected.
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here we go again 😅
"Felix, have you really made up your mind? You've been with us for less than a year, but I swear, your talents have been recognized by everyone in the company, and if you stay here, trust me, you'll achieve great things!" A typically middle-aged British man said, with a typical business suit and neatly groomed, slightly curly hair.detailHarry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat - lordharry2yrPosted
Review @chapter 87 It's OK. The only thing i see is quite a lot wasted potential. The plot is fantastic, and the elements are great. But the story is executed poorly. The way MC drags things unnecessarily seems stupid. Anyway, I don't generally criticise this much. it was just i was kinda hoping it become good with time, not reverse. Still a good read to pass time and have tht nostalgia. I will continue and give it another chance. Fingers crossed. - Avada Boom
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Review @chapter 65 Quite a good uptake on Harry Potter world. The one thing i liked the most was slow progression at the start which really gives you feel, like that tingling feel. There are some most stupid thing in it too. But which novel doesn't have it's quirks. the thing is writing skills is OK, and well, its pretty good compared to the trash which we generally don't mention. I would continue reading this. though, i have to say, MC can be a little dumb now and then. but nothing a little patience can't take care of. good luck author. let the god bury my review under others. - Avada Boom
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Review @chapter 157 I will first say what i didn't like. Constant fighting and interaction in the first 45 chapters. BUT... it wasn't boring. It all happened in 2days within novel, so i can ignore tht. The main thing is I got to know MC better. Now let's talk about what I liked. Everything. once i crossed that first 50 chapters, i couldn't find a single thing to complain. Author has very good writing skills and it don't take brains to realise tht. Progression is good so far and MC is not some jesus... i hate those novels where they are just all good and keep getting powers without any real goals and issues. So yes... I am reading this. Waiting for Vol 3 honestly. but take your time author. i can see hundreds of chapters of harry potter ahead. - avada boom
detailMultiverse Systems: Demonic Resurrection in the Primordial TowerBook&Literature · droopyauthor - lordharry2yrReplied to Xisaro
quite thick, aren't we? i thought my okk was enough to finish the debate... still, i am guessing u didn't read the book. so here's a cutout, and here harry isn't speculating, he is thinking in a sure manner that she Is part veela...
'Holy! He is Cedric Diggory, isn't he? So, the characters will look like their movie actors, huh,' thought Quinn as he observed a young Cedric Diggory. - lordharry2yrReplied to Xisaro
okk
'Holy! He is Cedric Diggory, isn't he? So, the characters will look like their movie actors, huh,' thought Quinn as he observed a young Cedric Diggory. - lordharry2yrReplied to Xisaro
her grandmother was veela, not a speculation, mentioned in goblet of fire
'Holy! He is Cedric Diggory, isn't he? So, the characters will look like their movie actors, huh,' thought Quinn as he observed a young Cedric Diggory.