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There is one small flaw which i've noticed while reading this novel. When Luke met lawyer Matt why didn't he acquire his super human senses this could be definitely useful. Forget about Sharp Nose. He could get Sharp Ears, Sharp Taste, Sarp Sixth Sense, etc. But he didn't. Did the author forget about it.
story is good but but the mc is like a doormat getting bullied and shoved around and not even resisting all in all she's not ruthless enough she would rather knock out someone than kill them even when they want to kill her and are people that deserve to die and then futher down the story those guys become a pain in the ass and still doesn't kill them.
i just have one problem that the author might have fotgotten to add in the novel which is Liu Chai's quest where he is supposed to obtain Mu Zhiguang's body and only obtains his arm so he has collect the whole body in a year otherwise he fails the quest and loses the arm. Now Mu Zhiguang died when the Sea King invaded Beiqi but Liu Chai still didn't get his body i thought he got it off-screen but author still shows that Liu Chai is only using Mu Zhiguang's arm even after his death. Even after 3 years have Liu Chai is still using Mu Zhiguang's arm when he is supposed to fail the quest even when he hasn't collected the rest of Mu Zhiguang's body. Did the author make a mistake somewhere if he has please i ask you to correct it. Great Novel though.
I picked this novel because it had a system tag but there was no system and for the ntr I thought it was the mc doing the ntr not getting ntr'd but it still wasn't my cup of tea I initially thought the mc would discover what happend to his women and getting killed in front of them after the women claim they have no love for the mc while they are getting banged so the villains kill him since he outlived his usefulness and go back in time to when he was a kid years before his mother get banged so he would have more time to prepare and kill the villains and at the same time ntr them but it looks I was wrong. good story though 5 stars.
i think the author forgot about the bloodline side quest the mc got in chapter 65 of the novel. i went through each and every page but i couldn't find it maybe i possibly missed it. can anyone tell me which chapter the mc completes this quest in. i'm actually looking foward for the mc becoming an incubus.