The ai generator didn't understand how to do that so I gave up on the eyepatch

Normal arm

he has fire hand bro

its not but ok

Fair enough. I would put it in terms of me buffing Kakuzu rather then nerfing Kaen. Kaen is already awkwardly strong for me to try and write interesting fights. Like, he's S-rank already at 13 years old, which was faster than I planned but that's just how it turned out.

Thanks for the good luck

I don't think that's a good reason for a bad rating. I'll admit my story is pretty cringe at times. But you put a 2-star rating not for the faults of my story, which I can accept, but because you don't like OCs in Naruto? Isn't that just a personal preference?

Thank you for the criticism. Even though you don't like the story, this is probably the most helpful review I've gotten in terms of what I can do better.

yes

His flames did burn through kakuzu’s threads, just not fast enough to stop them from hitting him. I didn’t make it really clear but I made the assumption that having an earth affinity would make him more resistant to the flames. I tried to convey that he bunches up a the threads for quantity over quality to slow down the burning effects of the flames. Condsidering that the threads are a powerful forbidden technique, I assumed they would be rather durable as well. Don’t know if that makes sense but those are my reasons

Fair enough. I’m not going to change the synopsis though bcuz I like it. It’s really just my personal preference that a synopsis reveals the bare minimum. I think my synopsis at least does that as the name also hints at what the story is about