Review Detail of CruelReality in Naruto: Reduce All Creation to Ash

The grammar is decent and I absolutely love the premise. However, what makes this difficult to read is mainly the mentality of the MC but also the system. I’ll cover the system first, essentially, the issue with it is that the percentages do not make sense. 45% progress for chakra is only the chunin level, and similarly other percentages are far far far too weak and do not reflect the MCs skill properly. Regarding the MC, he is, to put it simply, a pathetic moron that is skirting by on his privilege from the system and his birth situation. He wastes years not training swordsmanship, chakra control, or actually sparring for no reason at all. He still has not started practicing anytging to do with fire even though he is familiar enough with naruto to know about the exercise where you practice burning a leaf. Heck, he could ask his mom to give him a d rank fire jutsu or just experiment with trying to control fire… Basically, there is a two fold nerf: 1)the system percentages are weak relative to the template target. 2)the mc does nothing to speed up his process beyond the usual path of a ninja, his template is the only reason he is strong at all. Anyway, I hate to see a cool concept ran into the ground but I don’t want to read a slice of life about some moronic lucky POS skirting by bumbling through life based on his template. 4.2/10, the flaws run this story into the ground.