great chapter. but a bit too much melancholy

was a good chapter

Author Guy I loved all of your one piece fanfics until you dropped them. please don't drop this story ,cause it's an amazing story with a lot of potential

well that was quite interesting. Author , Jaden needs more growth and he needs more development.

incredible👍😍🤩

meh 😐. it's an alright fic to read but the world background build is not that great and the characters development is also poor. This is still better than some of the Hades Self insert style fics though. Idk about the updating stability though 🤷‍♀

but won't that reduce the quality? also wouldn't that lead to constant cliff hangers? . we are fine with the way you are going. but if it's more comfortable and convenient for you then do it bro.

well you NEED someone to edit this

I like it .an accidental lie turning into a real thing, now that's a plot twist if anything. I really like the viva la dirt league references though. Great chapter and i believe that you took Athena's characteristics from the PJO by Riordan?

Do it bro .its awesome that you do it.

again with the viva la dirt league references eh 😂🤣

bro 😂 viva la dirt league muggers eh. For those who don't know what I mean it's a comedic channel that makes fun of games and the muggers are charecters that are played on it.

Great chapter , please continue the good work

continue bro and never stop

for what? drugs?

13 days now is this novel on hiatus or something

come on man .stop with the emotional stuff. it's strong enough to make a almost grown to 😭 cry

joyboys coming 😂 hold on if you can whitebeard.

his name is silvers Rayleigh his nickname was Dark King and not pluton . come on man

it's one of the rare good fics in the whole of the Harry Potter fanfiction stories. Every thing is nice. it features a very and self developing harry rather than the usual op from birth type of HP fics.