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Revered_Venerable1yrCommentedWrinkled eyes?
The leader of the three inspectors was a middle-aged man with sharp eyes. He seemed to be able to read the mind of a person and make them fearful. His eyes were wrinkled, and the edge of his hat revealed light brown hair. He looked around the room and asked in a deep voice, "Do you know Welch McGovern?"- Revered_Venerable1yrReplied to Oto
Most of these guys were just degenerate newbs, don't listen to them, the story is actually very good. One of the reasons these guys were complaining like this is because they can't stand the pace the novel goes; most of them wants an op mc who's a degenerate just like them with a mind of a child's which is, again, just like them. Coming from someone who have seen enough trashy novels with stupid MCs and stupid fanbase. If anything, this novel have a very great potential (it could even surpass famous novels like Reverend Insanity, Lord Of The Mysteries, Coiling Dragon, Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, Solo Leveling (this one's a trash but I'll just put it here because of its so-called gates which were related to this novel.), My House Of Horrors, The Beggining After The End, Second Coming Of Gluttony (well, I won't even dare to say that this one's good, it's just because of its fame and the relation of it to the novel, the so-called gates or any method to go back and forth between two worlds. ) and many other such novels, which means, this could be one of the greatest (possibly even the best) novels around ahould the author not ruin the novel's quality.
- Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Going for the deathnote route this time around, eh?
The Notebook - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Four yonko and seven warlords of the seas, you mean?
Satisfied, Aguesid turned back to the crowd and announced, "From this day on, doomsday will fall on the seven pirates who call themselves Admirals and the four who call themselves Kings. They can only shiver in fear! - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Tf is a goose doing over here?
Honk! - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
The N word family
Of course, Audrey knew more. The main supporter of the Conservative Party was the present Duke of Negan, Pallas Negan, who was the brother of Aguesid! - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Ah, yes, the N word
The ceremony commenced with the arrival of the king's family. The incumbent Prime Minister, Lord Aguesid Negan, went up to the front. - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
All in all, she should've been already scouted by the gov. or just some rich-ass factions who hungers for power and authority unless... she hid her ability from those interviewers.
"Oh! That's my Ability. I can "see" people's Attributes. Sometimes, I also receive, uh, "visions". They can be about the future or the past. I mean, that's what I think… it only happened a couple of times." - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
And, if given the time, should she be able to prove that she could see the future or the past, then she should be held in high regards. But that's fir the future to show...
"Oh! That's my Ability. I can "see" people's Attributes. Sometimes, I also receive, uh, "visions". They can be about the future or the past. I mean, that's what I think… it only happened a couple of times." - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
This is going to be interesting
Ability Description: [Find a worthy master and let them know your True Name. Once they recite it out loud, you will be bound to their will, unable to disobey any command. It is improper for a shadow, let alone a divine one, to walk around without a master.] - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
A divine slave
'Divine… it's Divine.' - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
I think it should be 'underestimated' ?
From the Spell's point of view, Sunny was a dormant human. Having a Memory of a higher rank than his own soul core would be of great help once he enters the Dream Realm. The power gap between different ranks simply could not be overestimated. - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Its*
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After all you've been through, you still have the nerve to call this act as 'too much' ?
'Crap! This is… this is too much!' - Revered_Venerable1yrReplied to Revered_Venerable
But then again, it's just only a dream and the laws of physics only applies to a certain extent and the folds of reality could be wrapped about in any way someone with enough strength wants them to be. Plus, he's the MC, right?
"Let's go take a look." - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Costs time and a potential hindrance
Plus, despite Shifty's previous threats to kill him and overall unpleasantness, Sunny would have felt bad leaving a fellow slave in chains — especially since freeing him would not cost anything. - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Normally, it should be impossible for him to make a move like that, especially with his body's state, however; he's just in a dream and we could also take some factors into account like the power of adrenaline rush. Although, this should still be quite difficult even if you're granted with that temporary strength boost.
He pulled down with all his might, feeling the monster's body pressing against him, bone spikes brushing against his skin. The monster continued to struggle, clicking loudly and trying to break the chain tying him down apart. - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
I think it's quite reasonable, given the state of his mind is, well... Quite pathetic, atleast, for now... Plus, he also grew up in a poor environment and in dire straits. So... Combining all of these factors, it's reasonable enough why he would want the other soldier to die. In conclusion, his way of thinking was affected by the poverty he suffered. If anything, the MC's way of reasoning is atleast, quite realistic. (not outstanding nor exceptional but realistic. )
'And you, second.' - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
"Several dozens" please make sure to make it appear as "several dozens" only author, thank you
If a Master conquers the Third Nightmare, they become a Saint. Their Soul Core evolves to the Transcended Rank and they gain a Transformation Aspect Ability. There are only several dozen Saints in all of humanity. - Revered_Venerable1yrCommented
Man, it really feels so bad to read poorly structured low quality novels like this after you've already red quitw a sum of decently structured high quality novels.
Chen Ming froze as a chill ran down his spine, making him feel as if he was standing naked before Qin Feng, all his secrets exposed, and Qin Feng seeing through all that grime in his heart.