Hi author, no offense just giving my heartfelt advice here, I just think that maybe you can consider avoiding the words 'which was why' or 'which was' so often in every chapter on every novel you wrote. I noticed that every chapter has it, though I'm not very good with grammar or wording myself, I feel like it would make the stories look more professional 😉P.S: can you update the story about the dragon lady? Thanks

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The story is good alright, i just have a complain about the characters personality and mindset, like Madam Lians psychopath mentality and Mo yans overly dumb and slow mentality despite being a general. I mean yeah, madam lian is good at manipulating people but at the very least as a general, mo yan must have an ability to read a person. and please.... can you at least lessen the villains self opinionated and righteous line, I mean, the villains are portrayed as scheming and manipulating, but during their mental thought about the situation, they are like dumb people. I got the authors idea about different personalities shown than than what the villains are thinking, but for me, it feels redundant and made me a reader, lose some of my interest in reading.I don't know if other readers feel the same or if others understand what I'd like to express. anyway, sorry author, I just want to express my thoughts, but as you might have notice, I'm not very good at it. I'm still waiting for other chapters and continuously voting, though, my vote is not like before where I vote everyday, now, I only vote thrice a week (you know, losing interest). I hope this story can be improve more... waiting for mote 😘

It's a good story, I just hope it's not one of those story where the main character got entangled with many women because he was talented in their eyes, you know, that's what mostly hapened in stories 😑

still waiting for the updates ☺️ I hope it's not yet finished just like that

I like the story, hope to see more chapters soon 😘