Thanks for the feedback! I will try to add more as the story progresses between the characters.

I dont want to give away the whole backstory straight away, I left out a lot of details so they can be included later on in the story so not everything with be revealed all at once~ some explanation will continue within the next chapter regarding Nyx.

There will be multiple ML's x MC ~

inner turmoil. lol. This was my first time I've ever wrote a story so could just be how I wrote. But I imagined there would be a lot of thought not so much action in a surreal situation such as this :)