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Anjola_25801mthCommentedI love the detailed description!
He was dressed in all black, from the tip of his ponytail down to his weary shoes.- Anjola_25805mthReplied to Myra_Agpalza_Butac
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The book is one of a kind and the characters, the description and pacing is well written and balanced. The story flows smoothly which makes it all the more an amazing read. The synopsis made the FL mysterious but the Prologue and the first chapter made her all the more complex. The twist started since the first chapter because I was expecting something different from what I read after reading the Prologue. So for that, imma give the author a thumbs up!
- Anjola_258011mthCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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- Anjola_25801yrReplied to Beanie_Bola
That is the result of obsession 😌
"No, I can't. I can't let you go. I don't know what to do. I love you so much. I just want you by my side." - Anjola_25801yrReplied to _Cleo"But I still love you!" He expressed, taking one step closer, but Aylin held her hand forward to stop him from moving further.
- Anjola_25801yrReplied to"But I still love you!" He expressed, taking one step closer, but Aylin held her hand forward to stop him from moving further.
- Anjola_25801yrReplied to _Cleo
😂😂
Ugh! Aylin had hoped that the rain wouldn't start at least until she got home, but it seemed like luck was not on her side. What was she saying? Luck was never on her side. - Anjola_25801yrReplied to _Cleo
Thank you! 😘
Draped in black cloaks—the figures fought in darkness and the only sounds that could be heard were the clanging of swords as they echoed off the snowy cliffs and the forest behind them. - Anjola_25801yrReplied to Beanie_Bola
Glad to know that!🤭
Locked in a battle of swordsmanship and magic; a red burning sword clashed against a white glowing silver sword, the light from each sword illuminating their surroundings. Both of their attacks hit each other to take the other down. The snow crunched underfoot as they moved and their movements were fluid, neither wanting to back down. - Anjola_25801yrCommented
The description was good. I was able to imagine everything you described without a hitch, especially the room. The story's progress is also great, I loved how Arissa didn't immediately warm up to Mrs Wyatt because if she had then it would have been weird... Alright, next chap!
Ch 27 Dutch Courage. - Anjola_25801yrCommented
Thanks for the chapter!
Dutch Courage. - Anjola_25801yrReplied to Lizbella
- Anjola_25801yrPosted
The plot is similar to other plots in some stories in Webnovel but also different. I don't know about others but what I like about this story is the FL. I like almost everything about her but most of all, her outfits 😂 The writer is doing great in updating and making the story interesting. The characters were portrayed well and the world wasn't confusing. However, I must say that the author's writing needs some work. There are multiple mistakes in grammar, punctuation, and description. Aside from that, it's a great and intriguing story, and I would implore y'all to read it. Keep it up, Author! 🤍
- Anjola_25801yrCommentedCh 25 [BONUS CHAPTER] It's her
- Anjola_25801yrCommented
OH MY! TWO CHAPTERS?! YOU ROCK AUTHOR!! ❤️💖
[BONUS CHAPTER] It's her - Anjola_25801yrCommented
So sorry about your day, Author 🥺💜 But being half awake while typing and still being able to produce this beautiful chapter is something I must commend you for. What I love the most about this chapter was the change in behavior of the FL. I liked how she stood up for herself, threatened her useless parents, and thought positively. I'm loving this fiery side of the FL and I hope she can be like this and even fierier with the ML!!
Ch 24 Manipulation - Anjola_25801yrCommented
Take that old maggots!
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Arissa's smirk increased on her beautiful face as she now walked back to the couch and sat down more like a taunt to her parents, "I thought we would skip that Mr. Lincoln. It's been days and we have already sealed the agreements, haven't we."