whitevenom_2009
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whitevenom_200929dPostedthe early chapters were alright. It was not that bad, and I was expecting this to have some potential... until I got to chapter 300 and then realised... there's nothing. nothing that interested me, nothing to get engaged in the story, no world building bland interaction, boring story and plot. there's genuinely nothing interesting in the novel, and I wasted a lot of coins just for nothing. maybe my taste is different. Maybe my standards are too high, but it's just isn't for me. Of course, this could be your first novel, which I know may be hard for you as it is hard for others, so I hope you improve and learn from other great novels like reverend insanity or omniscient reader viewpoint trust me you can a lot from them I hope my advice can help you and I wish you luck on your journey. (English isn't my first language, so I'm sorry if there are any mistakes)
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that takes a lot of mana
"No, I should thank you. I didn't think I'd have time to get another run in today. My Golems deal most of my damage, and they can barely keep up with your movement speed." Cain laughs at the sight of his stumpy little Golems and their short legs struggling to keep up. - whitevenom_20091mthCommented
to everyone complaining......bro If you were suddenly transported to a world where only the strongest live, then you also will be cautious to every move you make
So that she will back off and give up? - whitevenom_20092mthCommented
it's hard to imagine this
The metal ring was composed of two semicircles, with an ingenious and delicate buckle in the middle that could be opened and closed. When put together, the seams were tight, and the whole had a silver-white luster, full of metallic texture. - whitevenom_20092mthReplied to crazyfunbun
then why call it an inverted mountain?
It was an ancient, inverted mountain. Instead of rising from the earth, it delved deep in, forming a spiraling abyss. Legends once stated that a demon had fallen from the sky and upon impact had created the place. - whitevenom_20094mthCommented
*soldiers
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No mine
-- -- -- - whitevenom_20094mthCommented"It seems you're awake," Zeras said to her as a cold smile widened on his face seeing the panic-stricken face of the lady. He'll finally be getting his answers.
- whitevenom_20094mthReplied to Felix_Neros
attrition
Naturally, any invaders didn't have it easy. Forced to operate on enemy soil, the conflicts often devolved into wars of attrition. - whitevenom_20094mthReplied to whitevenom_2009
I just read the next sentence and realised my mistake
The wolf turned its gaze in his direction, growling menacingly. Meanwhile, Zam sprinted with all his might towards the trap, the enraged wolf hot on his heels. - whitevenom_20094mthReplied to Poisonsectelder04_
this is a dystopian future. their morality may differ with ours
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space
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how about entropy? You literally can erase everything with that power
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- whitevenom_20094mthReplied to Supreme_IQ
turn his arms into guns
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why is it always the same?
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...and who is that?
He had read about main characters in web novels that did not have friends and cultivated for thousands of years, he thought it sounded ridiculous, but he now understood the reason. - whitevenom_20094mthReplied to FourSeven_
I think drakes are earth
Blake was assigned to the Wind Griffin dormitory, while Castiel and Brian were assigned the Phoenix and Drake dormitories respectively. - whitevenom_20094mthCommented
feel like they are accepting to all of this too quickly, like isn't it not more than a day they got reincarnated.
Blake stepped out of the bathroom and gave out a loud sigh... "What a day!" - whitevenom_20094mthCommented
did the asteroid come for round 2??!!
A very huge comet!!