this is a great start, I like it

thank you for your feedback, really appreciate it

you're not wrong. thanks, I'll make a correction

yay Ereti, you're reading my book 😌

black

I'm not Timmy, you will never know 🤣

bro i didn't have you in mind 🤣

arigato

Thanks for the correction, I'll have all these in mind when writing

muhuhahaha

arigatou