To be honest I don't understand the negativity that is in the comments, it's obviously not a bad fanfic for this site, it's unfair to give such a unit just because you didn't like certain things, I've seen a lot of really bad works on this site with a much higher rating, I don't think it's fair so I give it five stars, good luck to the author, do what you like.

people who give ratings to such works, I hate you, at the moment this story has a rating of 4.8, seriously? I read 45 chapters, except for negativity I received nothing, I held on only because it supposedly will get better, as many wrote, as for me with each the chapter only gets worse, the further you go the more wuxia style nonsense in terms of dialogue, the characters are annoying without exception, including the main character

the main character is a disgustingly weak-willed person, having the powers of a vampire to be afraid of ordinary people, you have to try, illogical behavior, after torture a child cannot remain innocent, she has been tortured for years and she behaves as if she has a slight trauma towards adults, and the fact that this an adult makes the situation even funnier, in general it’s physically painful to read

I didn’t like this fanfic, I’ll tell you why. The author can’t decide on mc’s skills, even at the beginning he gave up fencing and what do we see? an inventory filled with weapons and on top the author gives a chest in which there is a sword, it feels like mc is becoming more stupid with each chapter, but it should be the other way around; there’s also this fetish for explosions that I don’t like at all, I give it up the moment I open the chest, so I can’t say more, but what there is was enough to discourage me from reading, and my rating would have been better if there had not been such a high rating here, which this work does not deserve

2 chapters were enough for me to hate it. Naruto was going to kill people because they somehow insulted Hinata, for a second Naruto didn’t kill Nagato when he destroyed the entire village, even if there’s a different Naruto here, it’s wildly stupid, he just arrived in a new world ,nobody knows him, he's in bad shape, and the first thing he does is try to kill the villagers, it's brilliant, I won't read further

disappointment, that's what I feel, Itachi is acting stupid, firstly he is too insensitive, Itachi is a kind person, he is a complete pacifist, in the Naruto world he had to play the role of a villain, but in this world I don’t see a situation where he can just stand and watch how people die, but most of all I hate how this “shinobi” collects information, or rather, he doesn’t do this, even at the very beginning he could have learned a lot more from his grandfather, but he doesn’t do it, for some reason he fights with the Shinigami, hides, I don’t understand the logic of his actions, in the society of souls everyone knows about the Shinigami, the academy and other information that Itachi is thinking about, why rack your brains if you can go to the academy and find out everything there, even if you don’t want to be a Shinigami, you can simply not graduate from the academy, in general, Itachi is behaving stupidly, and for this character this is not permissible

the beginning was good, but for me Naruto’s behavior spoiled it, as for me when he was yelling about the Hokage he was much nicer, you scold Sasuke when Naruto himself is unbearable here, this feigned pathos only irritates

that is, we will now tactfully forget that Naruto knows fuinjutsu

if you are looking for a re zero fanfic with a different plot and a more pleasant main character, then this is not for you, here the plot does not change from the word at all, and the main character is much more annoying than Subaru, because Subaru was initially weak, but here mc has strength , compared to the Subaru, significant, but it copes with the situation just as well, if not worse, and the author has not updated the work for a month to see the development of the plot, if there is such a thing

this story does not deserve such a dry assessment, so I will restore the balance, firstly, the main character spends points to save memories, after a minute his class memories are erased, leaving only useless ones that he could get on his own without any difficulties, secondly, his sister infuriates me, like and their interactions on the part of mc, thirdly, the main character spent glasses to get eyes that see through illusions, but for some reason he didn’t see Aizen and I don’t want to know what the author will come up with to justify this disgrace like “he needs to turn on his eyes like sharingan" or something like that, the author, before he even started the story, immediately ruined it

at the moment when the skill of changing appearance appeared, I immediately realized that this was not for me, I hate hiding my identity,unfortunately this has become a fetish for many fanfic authors

this fanfic evokes double feelings. on the one hand, there are very few works on Spider-Man, except for those with no more than 20 chapters. I would like to somehow improve the rating, but at the same time it is frankly weak, the main character sometimes behaves very strangely, and in general the character of the characters is not conveyed very well, they feel different, I didn’t make it past 50 chapters. Again, this is a matter of taste, so I won’t spoil the rating with too low a rating just because I didn’t like it, good luck to the author

from the category “they hurt me, so no matter how well you treat me, I’ll be angry because you’re adults and I don’t trust anyone, and in general I’m an asshole” do people really like this, the main character is so flawed that it really hurts, I I almost resigned myself that I would never read a more or less normal Spider-Man fanfic

Only mediocrities write about copying abilities, it’s boring and not creative, especially since the characters behave like fuckers, they’re below average

I’m so tired of this hide and seek, why are the authors trying to make the main character hide, but at the same time deliberately drawing attention to them, it’s annoying because it’s useless, you don’t have to tell everyone that you’re from another world, why not show that you’re a powerful person and join the family of a reliable god, and not hide behind a mask, attracting the attention of all the gods, why even have a mask when no one knows you anyway, it’s simply unbearable

If you are not from America, I don’t recommend reading it, because from the first chapters the text screams, America is the center of the world, Superman, who was supposed to be the hope of humanity, is going to fight for the USA

the author overdid it at the beginning with how good the mother and son are, so much so that I was rooting for the demon if only they would stop this theatrical scene, and then I’ll stop reading this

поразительно, как автор выбрал друзей для MC, все персонажи, которые меня раздражают его друзей, когда он стал меньше с ними общаться, стало лучше, как бы мне не нравились персонажи в таком количестве, и MC, я понимаю, что дело в моем вкусе, в целом хорошая работа ,персонажи живые и способности плохие

I can describe in one word, a boring, lousy retelling of the original with minor changes, I stopped reading on page 15, I don’t recommend even trying, it’s not interesting and it’s poorly written

I recently wrote a bad review of this work, at that time I read one chapter, I still haven’t read more than one chapter, it’s bad because the main character is too strong, I don’t like that, it’s much more interesting if the main character is a little stronger than many, but it is possible to overwhelm him with numbers, so he is still afraid and thinks with his head before doing anything, why did I delete the bad rating? Yes, because the author, despite the disapproval, writes further, in this fandom you very rarely see work with more than 15 chapters,, thanks to the author for this, and I think the author will gain experience while writing this, please do not stop writing and listen to criticism in the comments, it is clear that you cannot please everyone, but for yourself you can emphasize what needs to be corrected, removed or added, and then having learned use your mistakes to correct this story or write another one head and shoulders above, good luck and inspiration