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alexa4c2yrReplied to RolaySaltT20No, it is a fan service. đ What you are probably referring to is a critique, but there is a big difference between a critique and readers suggestions where the story should go. Critique doesnât tell author how they should make the story it only explains why the story or some plot elements are good or bad. And if you are wondering why is it bad for readers to suggest how story should go, well, first, readers donât have the full grasp of the story, only author knows how they have envisioned the story, what message they want to sent (if there is any), how characters should evolve, what questions this story should raise in readers⊠You and I as readers we have no clue about these things. Only when the story is complete we may see that. As for this particular example, if the author saw that the story is going in this particular way, he shouldnât have asked the readers about their opinion, he should just make it as he thinks the story should evolve.
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23. She said she was 23 when she died.
Such things would usually be done by the servants but he did everything by himself. When she had her first menstrual period, the 18-year-old Han Jian Yu personally taught her about those things after doing his research on it. - alexa4c2yrCommented
Full of sugars. Better eat an orange, it has fibers along with fructose.
Although, they were going to get a divorce now but before that, she could take a little teeny-tiny bit of advantage of her husband's wealth and status. "Get me a glass of fresh orange juice," she said. - alexa4c2yrCommented
Hmmm, impossible. Even with less strawberries it would take much more time, unless you have big spray bottles but it would still take some time.
She gently pressed the bottle, and the water would spill out on the leaves or flowers. It took little effort and time. They literally needed to walk around the farm. Soon, they finished their work. - alexa4c2yrCommented
I grew strawberries, they are very short plants, you have to bend even if you sprinkl only leafs.
"No!" Xiao Lingyu shook her head. She had experimented with this before. If the water touched the root, it would become too big. But the effect would be less obvious if they only sprinkled the leaves. Plus, they didn't need to bend down to water the soil. - alexa4c2yrCommented
*I will ever love I think google docs has grammar check, also there are some other free tools.
"She's the only woman I ever love."Â - alexa4c2yrCommented
@author âtearing lipsâ, âtearing smileâ and all the other combinations are not phrases in the English language where the meaning is releated to smiling. Lips can tear but that means you hurt you lips, there is a wound, a tear. For the context you want, lips can twitch, curl, curve⊠a smile can play on his lips, smile can curve his lips, it can dazzle, shine and so on⊠There are endless possibilities so ditch this âtearingâ thing. There is also a phrase âface split into a wide smileâ , maybe this is what you wanted to say, because split and tear are synonyms.
"Oh, I'm not picky. Besides, I trust you," said Vince, tearing his lips with a warm smile. - alexa4c2yrCommentedCh 41 Wish To Meet Her Family
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How would she know, they donât really talk?
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How? If you are sitting on a chair a looking at other students, are they making cocktails above your head?đŻ
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Really? Is she going to the university to be a model, makeup artist, stylist? I thought she is studying some business or management course.
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Red is very much standard lipstick color. Not sure what is weird or âfunnyâ about it. It could be said that it is a loud, conspicuous or âlook at meâ color.
To be honest, he hates looking at women who wear too much makeup and wear funny color lipstick. But it seems even more beautiful on Hailey wearing a red one. - alexa4c2yrCommented
Their communication is zero.
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Of course, there were also people who mocked Xiao Lingyu. A raped woman would be drowned in the olden days. Even now, many rape survivors committed suicide. As Zhang Chunjiao said, there was an example in a nearby village. - alexa4c2yrCommented
Yup, red alert, weird, a bit psycho, vibes.
Although, he never did anything which overstepped her boundaries, she was still wary of him. There was this danger in his eyes that she couldn't seem to understand. Every time he looks at her, it was as if he was looking at his prey. She was worried. - alexa4c2yrReplied to XueXing
I get creepy vibes from Arthur. His stalkerish behavior coupled with her instincts on alert equals something weird.
"Yup. So far, things are sailing smoothly." Arthur answered with a smile. "But my love life isn't. Do you have any advice?" - alexa4c2yrCommented
Hahaha, like a true parent. đ
In the end, Nate couldn't help but take those out. But then again, there was no place where to store them. In the end, he finished everything the little girl left. - alexa4c2yrCommented
Hahahaha, what a dumb move. đ
«Come on, do I look easy to hurt?» he chuckled.