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Cthulhu‎‎

Author great job on the chapter...my opinion: skip the hateful/perverted comments about the lemon scene u did great, just some boy wanted to relieve themselves a little they don't understand how important deadpool is :)

It's kirin not raikiri

Well... no future undercover mission for x drake 😂

U know the whole point of nerfing the mc is quite pointless for me ... If u think that by doing this u are improving your story, u should propably stop writing men . Think something of a slow pace dont just make him op and then nerf him ... Brainless development.

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If u think those wishes are op then u are brain dead truly if u were reincarnated by some Rob and asked those wishes u will be a pitiful existance.(It doesn't have to be some op build just a decent build not some random things)

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I hope no one read your works from now on

His arms were a little numb because of his numbing darkness claws... OK u don't have to comment on this .... I understand 💀

Even for that, for me who is from Greece , he did good. Something I would have changed in your example would be like this. Instead of "Δεν θα" to " Μην τολμήσεις να" and "αν προσπαθήσεις" to "αλλιώς" (It seems more fierce and intimidating) Full sentence: _______________ Μην τολμήσεις να πειράξεις την ψυχή της, αλλιώς θα σε εξαφανίσει... _______________ Even if I'm from Greece, someone who studies in a coaching school or a University is better than me who has basic knowledge of my language (the only advantage I have from someone who is not a native, is that I speak Greek every day but that doesn't mean that I know Greek better .. I thought that I had to clarify that ... sorry for the long explanation) In my opinion is a matter of perspective and nothing else , everyone has the right to believe what is the most suitable for him even if it is wrong or right, in cases like this it doesn't matter at all. __________________ Επίσης σας εύχομαι σε όλους χαρούμενες μέρες μπροστά σας και να μην αφήνετε τις δυσκολίες της ζωής να σας ρίχνουν την ψυχολογία ... α και παιδιά είναι απλά σχόλια, μην γινόμαστε τοξικοι ..τα παιδιά γράφουν ιστορίες για την διασκέδαση μας αυτό που αξίζουν περισσότερο από όλα είναι η κατανόηση μας.😉 __________________