Try 5

Not yet. He only became captain a few decades before the start of the story and current events are centuries in the past.

Not true, The Kyuubi wasnt letting him merge with Fukasaku so Fukasaku could gather thr sage energy for him. Naruto alone could never gather the energy while moving. Once he gained Kurama’s cooperation he had the fox gather the energy for him which is why he was perpetually in sage mode during the later stages of the war.

We gonna have a swiggity midnight update?

When the world needed him most, H2kizzy vanished

Poggers update schedule my dude

What happened to the first 2 daughters

This story is pretty good, does the fact that you are now posting here mean that there will be updates on ao3 and AH.com?

How could you drop this wonderful fic without even having him stomp the rest of the scythes with his perfect susanoo.

Interesting start so far and the spelling and grammar are actually readable so good job.

I think that since he does not have ems, susanoo would blind him too quickly to be truly useful.

So far so good, but i dont think you should be descriving Aerys as an old man just yet since he is only 32. Duskendale has yet to occur which means his steep mental and physical decline has also not yet happened.

Good to know

I think thats something unique to the rasenshuriken due to how it works. Other elemental rasengan may not have the same drawbacks.

Also will he stack sage mode on top of the lightning armor?

Story is good so far so hopefully it doesnt get dropped. Otherwise with only 2 chapters out there isnt much else to comment on so keep it up.

The fact that the english is actually readable puts this story above most of the others on here by a long shot so good job.

I kinda hope you dont do fuinjutsu, its something that a lot of other fics do which leaves other skillsets underexplored. Maybe nintaijutsu with an element other than lightning?

Wow this is an absolutely stunning piece of artistic value. Never before have I witnessed such a fine weave of delicate word play. Honestly you could easily open a patreon with how good this story is.